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Lantz's fics / Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion
« on: April 29, 2013, 11:40:11 PM »
I assume caster would be a witch but otherwise human, Bazzet would be an elf, dunno about saber etcetera yet.
Hmm, I was assuming Caster was an elf, but OK.

And, OK, fair enough. I don't know either, really....

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Lantz's fics / Re: The Round Table (A collaborative fiction thread)
« on: April 29, 2013, 11:35:07 PM »
please stop the enemy crap, we moved pasted that awhile ago.
Well, she would be.

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Lantz's fics / Re: of flesh and fantasy poll and discussion.
« on: April 29, 2013, 11:34:57 PM »
no, i need to have the other games shown to be blank slates to adjust for where it get placed.
Oh, OK....

Well, that's a shame, because I really like the two-team torture thing....

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Lantz's fics / Re: The Round Table (A collaborative fiction thread)
« on: April 29, 2013, 11:08:26 PM »
no, obviously not but it won't be as bad as being hip connected
I don't agree, at least with Sakura she has a master who she has a reason to fight for.

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i doubt not being connect to a main character (more so faulty because rider IS one) will get her less development.
It will, because she will just be an enemy to Shirou etc., and nothing more.

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Lantz's fics / Re: of flesh and fantasy poll and discussion.
« on: April 29, 2013, 10:57:45 PM »
i don't know where it'll be place, so with your idea setup the rest of the material needs to be left to balance the tone, either entering or exiting a darker period in the overall story
Ah, I see, so you want lighter games, basically? I'd like the two-player torture game in there, at least, and the Crystal Maze-like one is broad enough to fit anything, as is the blind-date like one.

Also, like I said, I don't have any other ideas, so either we discuss this one or we just stop until I think of something....

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Lantz's fics / Re: The Round Table (A collaborative fiction thread)
« on: April 29, 2013, 10:57:01 PM »
how much character development do the servant get? very little, see ubw and all of rider in canon.

Yeah, but Rider isn't going to stop being a servant just because she's paired up with someone else. Further, not being connected to one of the main characters means she's going to get even less.

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Lantz's fics / Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion
« on: April 29, 2013, 10:54:47 PM »
that works. have to decide the other characters and their relations.
Yeah.

One thing we've not yet worked out is what race Caster is. Rin is obviously a demon, and Sakura's sister, I assume she'll be involved in punishing Caster at some point.

For the rest, I dunno. Who is even around?

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Lantz's fics / Re: of flesh and fantasy poll and discussion.
« on: April 29, 2013, 10:38:29 PM »
I think other games should be left to ear, particularly because of the lack of sectional context.
What?

Also, I don't have any other arc ideas right now....

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Lantz's fics / Re: The Round Table (A collaborative fiction thread)
« on: April 29, 2013, 10:27:20 PM »
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But you could just as easily say Saber is "just a shield for Shirou" or that Archer is "just a shield for Rin". That is what a servant does.

often to their detriment but no more so then Rider.
What?

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given that the grail war is the set up to "open world" publishing I think it's less important to have a major role here then to setup better roles for later.
Perhaps, but I don't think removing Rider from Sakura's control does that. If anything, I'd say you're getting it in reverse. Linking Rider to Sakura might limit her in this story, but it allows her to grow in future stories. If you don't have her as Sakura's servant, I can't see how she can realistically even survive the war.

And, I would like Sakura to have a major role here. Not to mention that giving her a servant etc. will aid in setting up a better role for her later on, as opposed to her not being given a chance to prove herself in any way.

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Lantz's fics / Re: of flesh and fantasy poll and discussion.
« on: April 29, 2013, 10:25:12 PM »
I think that's enough detail honestly. we should move on to other arcs.
Really? We've basically only planned out the porn, we've not designed the actual gameshow at all. Also, what about other possible games...?

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Lantz's fics / Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion
« on: April 29, 2013, 10:24:34 PM »
I think he might reconsider the all demons/devils are totally evil but frankly it wouldn't easily change him to jump into bed with her. although i can see the last part.
Well, perhaps not, but he might see that it is causing her problems. And, I don't think having a horny Succubus around is a particularly good plan. One possibility is that they could go see Rider, and then Rider could "relieve" her.

I would say she should definitely fuck Shirou, but possibly not straight away. Because, like you say, it's going to take quite a bit to convince him that not all devils are completely evil....

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Lantz's fics / Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion
« on: April 29, 2013, 10:00:40 PM »
if it were just that then I would have made it a one shot, with a continuing story you need consistency
Well, yes, true.

The point is that it could easily push him towards having sex with her, which is something we definitely do want to happen. At very least, she'd spend a lot of time seducing him, probably very aggressively (e.g. he'd wake up to find her giving him a tit-job...).

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Lantz's fics / Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion
« on: April 29, 2013, 09:38:50 PM »
she'll have to suffer with it then
This is supposed to be porn, you know....

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Lantz's fics / Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion
« on: April 29, 2013, 09:03:50 PM »
he's a knight and logically they don't fuck devils and demons. character change has to happen.

I see....

Well, how would we work that, then? Because Sakura is going to be seriously horny, to the point that it's causing her suffering.

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Lantz's fics / Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion
« on: April 29, 2013, 09:00:46 PM »
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taking her home with him to recuperate

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. Shirou accepts, because she's a horny succubus and seducing people is her job

way out of character

How?

Succubi are literally designed to seduce men. He gets all the benefits of that, he gets to relieve Sakura's suffering and he doesn't have to pay any price for it. What reason does he have to refuse?

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Also, aren't Succubi supposed to go and seduce people, rather than relying on being summoned?

they can.

Well, that's one less-evil path Sakura could take, I guess, going out and hunting down rapists, murderers etc., seducing them and then draining them....

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