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Lantz's fics / Re: of flesh and fantasy poll and discussion.
« on: April 30, 2013, 03:14:34 AM »
exactly, aiming for darkness is hard to begin with.

Yeah, I guess....

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Lantz's fics / Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion
« on: April 30, 2013, 03:14:23 AM »
it's not the elf thing just the magic user bit, summoning devils isn't something you just do, plus revenge isn't really viable, she would have become a crusader instead of a magic user.

I see....

Well, then how can we make the idea work? I don't get how what Caster is doing to Sakura is going to get her power.

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Lantz's fics / Re: The Round Table (A collaborative fiction thread)
« on: April 30, 2013, 03:13:53 AM »
the word obsessed is a key warning some thing is wrong. concerned is fine, obsession is not

Well, I'm not sure that you could actually call Rider "obsessed" with Sakura. It's not like she spends every waking moment thinking about her, or is incapable of having feelings that don't relate to her. She just cares very deeply for her, and is willing to do whatever it takes to protect her.

I'd say Rider is more like a very protective big sister, really. She cares a lot for Sakura and will do whatever she must to protect her, but she's not "obsessed" in the sense you claim. In particular, in HA she doesn't just follow Sakura around all the time or anything, she does have her own interests.

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Lantz's fics / Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion
« on: April 30, 2013, 03:01:32 AM »
i can't see a reason for an elf to capture a demon or devil except seeking power

Well, like I said, revenge for something. Perhaps a devil hurt her, or her family. Although, if the elf thing is the issue, then we could just make her a normal human....

The problem with the "seeking power" thing is that it means she won't really be trying to hurt Sakura, as such, just to experiment on her, and that gets in the way of what I'm aiming for with the scene.

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Lantz's fics / Re: of flesh and fantasy poll and discussion.
« on: April 30, 2013, 02:59:27 AM »
unfortunate but faf is supposed to be happy and silly after all.

Well, yes, true....

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Lantz's fics / Re: The Round Table (A collaborative fiction thread)
« on: April 30, 2013, 02:59:00 AM »
well then we have a serious problem because i see her being sakura obsessed on this path which yeah I see as bad because of the trap she's stuck in as a result.

I don't see her being "Sakura-obsessed" as bad, I see it as a fundamental and important part of her character.

So, yeah, we do have a serious problem here....

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Lantz's fics / Re: The Round Table (A collaborative fiction thread)
« on: April 30, 2013, 02:43:45 AM »
perhaps, still do you have a way to give rider development outside of sakura?

Not really, at least during the Grail War, but I don't think what you are suggesting really will either. She and Sakura will both just end up getting largely ignored. And, as I've already said, I like her devotion to Sakura, I don't want to cut that aspect out.

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Lantz's fics / Re: of flesh and fantasy poll and discussion.
« on: April 30, 2013, 02:42:44 AM »
well crying girls isn't the point of faf anyways.

Well, no, perhaps, but it is my sort of thing....

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i say roll with the idea of greek like utopia

Yeah, that probably makes sense, although it doesn't seem to have much of a BDSM element.

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Lantz's fics / Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion
« on: April 30, 2013, 02:42:09 AM »
they are sisters but competitive and willing as devils do to steal things or ppl from the other

Ah, I see, so they're not particularly loving towards one another?

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caster wouldn't hate sakura, she'd just be growing power with her experiments.

What?

My intention was for her to have kidnapped Sakura because she wanted to make her suffer, not to experiment on her. Hence why I was suggesting that she have some issue with either Sakura, her family or devils in general.

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Lantz's fics / Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion
« on: April 30, 2013, 02:19:56 AM »
rin and sakura would act catty i imagine.
What do you mean?

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caster, could be a drow type thing.
Eh, what?

How would that lead to her hating Sakura?

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Lantz's fics / Re: of flesh and fantasy poll and discussion.
« on: April 30, 2013, 02:19:28 AM »
er, hmmm, like Greek futurist culture, ultra peaceful with police as a formality.

Well, yeah, possibly.

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Also, I don't get how a utopia is better for BDSM than a dystopia....

free love versus rebels associating torture with, well torture

Well, it allows for consensual BDSM more, yes, but not so much hardcore BDSM and definitely not torture stuff.

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Lantz's fics / Re: of flesh and fantasy poll and discussion.
« on: April 30, 2013, 02:02:22 AM »
Well, yeah, but what sort of utopia are we looking for here?

Also, I don't get how a utopia is better for BDSM than a dystopia....

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Lantz's fics / Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion
« on: April 30, 2013, 01:47:45 AM »
that's fine i guess, but lets work on the characters, not their tastes

Well, yeah, sure. With Caster, though, I want to work out what she'd have against Sakura (either directly or indirectly). I also would like to work out Sakura and Rin's relationship etc., and how they generally act (being devils, but also being Rin and Sakura...).

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Lantz's fics / Re: The Round Table (A collaborative fiction thread)
« on: April 30, 2013, 01:46:53 AM »
it just proves they are good people, goodness is not contrived, (except ppl like shinji)

There's a difference between being "good" and being willing to risk your life to protect someone you don't know. And, plus, even if they are willing, Rider still has to find them. Sure, she can get people to help her, but the likelihood of said person having magic circuits is low.

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Lantz's fics / Re: The Round Table (A collaborative fiction thread)
« on: April 30, 2013, 01:25:59 AM »
seems like any solution here is contrived or ooc

You've not yet tried to find any solution to my fundamental objections. All you're even attempting to address here are the practical issues with it. And, frankly, having two seperate servants come across non-magi with magic circuits in the same school who are willing to help them out despite the potential risk to their own life is contrived. Having it happen once is OK, but doing it twice is just getting silly, and it's also rather repetitive.

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