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Lantz's fics / Situational Shorts (discussion)
« on: May 13, 2015, 07:34:17 AM »
I'm doing a project, due to the varying nature of the stories i'm calling them situational shorts. However rather than just doing all the deciding myself and present something nice and packaged as a result I stumbled on a thought. Given the number of possible characters (over sixty from all four plus works) and the possible combinations thereof, I need a greater cross section of opinions and view points.

The premise is this, seven characters chosen from the total list (likely using a poll if BL can support sixty odd options total) along with a seeded eighth character (be they canon, fanon or otherwise) are paired up to interact in individual shorts with different themes (in example, stranded, trapped, sol compatibility and so on) all the characters will be paired together in this way. In addition there'll be two versions of the work, one with adult content and one without. They'll be fairly different as a result.

What I want is to generate some discussion, about possible themes, pairings, interactions, the stresses of the situations and/or prefered or interesting dynamics.

I'll be putting up a poll once I get the exact details of how that does/will have to work.

Until then I would encourage discussion of the subject.

Have at it guys.

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Lantz's fics / Re: Lantz's Cosmology index.
« on: April 28, 2015, 11:27:56 AM »
Universe 0: Pre-Fate, the universe which according to Merlin contains greatest possibilities. It is the universe which contains the World's history prior to the events of the Fifth Grail War and the events in Misaki City.

Universe -x (e.g. -100): The designation for universes such as Fate/Prototype and KnK, which qualify as the base of later released works such as Fate/Stay Night and Tsukihime

Universe +x (e.g. +100): The designation for alternate history universes such as Fate/Extra and so on.

Universe x/k (e.g. 100/2): The designation for alterations to the neutral-numbered timelines before Pre-Fate and prior to the events in Misaki City.

Universe 200: A universe wherein Sakura Matou learned to endure and control the Grail's curse post-Fate route. The events of this universe lead to the creation of the Caster-class Sakura known as The Black Witch.

Universe 201: The universe shown in Hospital Food Sucks, it is the origin of the Saber-class servant Mage Knight Rin.

Universe 202: A universe where Taiga Fujimura wound up killing Gilgamesh though a series of events and survived the curse of The Holy Grail, only to be driven insane. The Mad Tiger, a Berserker-class version of Taiga Fujimura is the resulting heroic spirit from these events.

Universe 203: The home universe of Kiritsugu Emiya, the child of Shirou Emiya and Rin Tohsaka following the UBW True ending

Universe 204: The home universe of Shinjiro Emiya, the son of Shirou Emiya and Sakura Matou following the HF True ending

Universe 205: After Shirou Emiya was sealed by the Mage Association, Sakura Matou took it upon herself to take revenge against the system which had not only caused the death of her friend but had previously destroyed her own life. From this, Sakura became a killer of Magi and thus qualified as a Heroic Spirit.

Universe 206: A universe containing the Vampire Apocalypse which Arturia Pendragon was intended to stop by returning from Avalon before Merlin interfered, causing that reality to splinter and be replaced with the Universe detailed in the story "Of Swords and Sorcery".

Universe 207: The universe which is detailed in "Shinji's Route".

Universe 208: The universe containing the story of Rin "Matou" Tohsaka, the "Witch of the Clock Tower".

Universe 209: The universe Containing the story "Neo Rome" where Nero rules the world.

Universe 210: The universe containing the story "Haunted", Post-MoS.

Universe 211: A universe where Shirou Emiya married Bazzet McRemitz.

Universe 212: A universe where Kiritsugu Emiya lived through the Fourth War and into the Fifth.

Universe 213: A universe detailing a polygamous relationship between Rin, Shirou and Saber following the UBW Good ending.

Universe 214: The universe containing the Forgotten Arms apartment complex.

Universe 215: The universe containing the Unity storyline.

Universe 216: The universe containing the Light of Destiny storyline.

Universe 217: the universe containing the Eclipse future timeline.

Universe 218: The universe of the "Mad God" Shirou Emiya, obsessed with reviving Saber post-HF.

Universe 219: The Universe known as Demon's Den where Magic and God do not exist. Instead, everyone possesses abilities called Fabrication of Will, similar to reality marbles.

Universe 220: The universe known as the Golden Garden, where Gilgamesh attained immortality.

Universe 221: the home Universe of Shirou Kotomine, possessor of Solomon's law and a Reality Marble involving a principle of theology rather than Emiya's swords.

Universe 222: A universe where the characters all work at a pizza place.

Universe 223: A universe where the characters are all from ninja clans.

Universe 224: A universe where the Hassan menace Fuyuki City under the command of Kotomine and are opposed by Kiritsugu Emiya and four heroes.

Universe 225: The universe where Crimson moon defeated Zelretch and no life remains among the stars.

Universe 226: A universe where Shiki Tohno slaughters humanity after being exposed to the Grail's curse.

Universe 227: The Black World, a universe where Dark Sakura took over planet Earth, enslaving the populace.

Universe 228: High Heaven, a world where angels watch over the earth.

Universe 229: Dimension X, a strange universe where everyone looks like Saber.

Universe 230: A universe where physics only applies to those who understand its principles.

Universe 231: A universe where telecommunications do not exist, as every attempt to create them results in a wrong number message.

Universe 232: The universe of the Order of Time, a group of knights awaiting the return of King Arthur.

Universe 233: A universe where Arturia Pendragon became the Queen of Knights as she never had to hide to identity as a woman.

Universe 234: A universe where all the characters are Muppets.

Universe 235: A universe where Caster succeeded in her plans in Unlimited Blade Works.

Universe 236: Zombie apocalypse universe.
 
Universe 237: The home universe of "Bat Emiya", a Shirou Emiya possessing no magical powers.

Universe 238: The universe where Shirou Emiya married Taiga Fujimura.

Universe 239: A universe where a time loop occurs as well as mass death and insanity until Rin Tohsaka becomes aware and the sole murder using a large machete.

Universe 240: A universe where everyone practices over-the-top, extreme versions of mundane sports and games.

Universe 241: The universe of G-Chan, a female Gilgamesh interested in Satoshi.

Universe 242: The home of the Dark King.

Universe 243: The home of the Queen of Puppets.

Universe 244: The home of the Red Queen.

Universe 245: The world of Fate/Play Set where everyone and everything is made of Lego.

Universe 246: A universe where Red Arc fights an immortal Arturia Pendragon after Shiki's death. The home of the "Vampire Pirate Ninja" version of Satsuki.

Universe 247: The Vampire universe.

Universe 248: A universe where Kirei Kotomine and Gilgamesh battle the evil of Shirou Emiya and his group of allies.

Universe 249: The Power Rangers/Sentai universe.

Universe 250: A universe where every servant summoned is a Saber resulting in the Saber Wars.

Universe 251: A Universe where every servant summoned is Arturia Pendragon resulting in a total cease fire in the Grail War.

Universe 252: The Sakura Wars story line, in which every version of Sakura Matou is summoned as a Heroic spirit.

Universe 253: A universe where Archer succeeds in UBW and discovers the ultimate truth.

Universe 254: a Universe where Kohaku rules the world with her army of Mecha Hisui.

Universe 255: the world of "A Promise Kept".

Universe 256: The Universe of Maison Emiya, where maids await a master for the large mansion.

Universe 257: The Campiverse, where everything plays out like a campy TV show.

Universe 258: Bizzaro world, where everything is the opposite of normalcy.

Universe 259: The repeating universe.

Universe 259: The repeating universe.

Universe 260: The Deja-vu universe.

Universe 261: a universe where the Age of the Gods never ended.

Universe 262: The universe of the story "Super Magic Battle Academy", where the characters are all students and teachers in a facility intended to train their skill against the Types of other worlds beyond the solar system.

Universe 263: A bizarre universe where Gilgamesh and Enkidu are revealed to be future versions of Shirou Emiya and Saber.

Universe 264: A universe where Shirou Emiya became the world's greatest hero.

Universe 265: a universe where Shirou Emiya became the only Master in the Fifth War.

Universe 266: The universe of the Inescapable storyline.

Universe 267: A universe where Shirou Emiya became a hero alongside his wife Sakura Matou, this universe is the origin of the Heroic Spirit version of Sakura as an Archer.

Universe 268: The universe in which Satoshi became legal counsel for Shirou Emiya and caused his death sentence to be overturned.

Universe 269: The universe occupied a maddened Arturia Pendragon.

Universe 270: The world detailed in the Smoking Gun storyline.

Universe 271: A universe where Arturia Pendragon became Type Earth and rules the planet.

Universe 272: The universe detailed in the Borders of Fate storyline.

Universe 273: The world detailed in the Blood of Kings storyline.

Universe 274: A universe where the crew of the EF Starship Destiny under Captain Archer sails the stars.

Universe 275: A lifeless world where the sun went supernova.

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Fan Clubs / Re: Cherry Blossom Club
« on: April 26, 2015, 09:45:50 PM »
I'm offended

her ribbon is disobeying physics :p

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Lantz's fics / The Infinite Road, a Meta drabble/one shot thread
« on: April 18, 2015, 12:34:37 AM »
In a large room with a black carpet and off-white walls, three people sit on a long couch made for five occupants. They are the Heroic Spirit Emiya, Arturia Pendragon and a man called Lantz.

"Okay, I understand how Saber loses, but why?" Archer asked.

"Enough Archer! You embarrassed me just bringing up the loss. Has time hardened your heart so much that you would ask me to hear the story over again?" Saber stated, intercepting the question.

Archer was taken aback by the pain he had caused her, but the third of the group Lantz just shrugged.

"It's infinite possibilities, you have to lose to Gilgamesh eventually", he said, standing up from the sofa. "Now introduce the format and content, I need caffeine in soda form...", he added, trailing off as he left for the kitchen.

The two heroes looked puzzled for a moment, until they found the correct area of the far wall.

"Er, right. So this is a meta-theater. Lantz is using this as a format to do several things at once as he hates to individualize things", Archer began.

"In addition to posting scenes or short prototype ideas, Lantz is using this meta-theater to answer questions raised, either through his words or by the character in question. Think of it as backstage interviews with the cast and crew in a way", Saber added, fussing with her blouse slightly.

Archer nodded ."He'll also be explaining concepts and certain issues to facilitate better understanding of how he views the Nasuverse and fiction in general."

"You forgot about the part where not just Type-Moon characters can come to comment on or appear in these scenes and the part about mini requests", Lantz said, having returned from the kitchen with snacks in one arm and cans of Yoohoo in the other.

"Mini requests are where the Mongrels in the audience can make simple requests, such as 'write a scene with X characters'. It has to be a reasonable size for the format, however. As for the characters, other than Saber and her Mongrel pets like this faker, Lantz is correct. However, as it is clear that those reading want quality commentary and I, their King am already here to give my opinion, these other characters hardly matter. My subjects already know they need no other opinion than mine to guide their tastes.”

The echo from the hallway was none other than the voice of the King of Heroes and, as the first King turned the corner to come into view of the others, the two heroes let out a groan, whilst Lantz merely took his seat.

"Enkidu, over a table, being gangbanged by Rider, Dark Sakura, Satoshi and Fem Kirei while you're made to watch", Lantz announced, drawing looks from the three others.

"Technically, I only have hard rules against Yaoi and Loli content. I hate NTR with the blazing passion only surpassed in equal measure by my love of transforming heroes, and I have a dislike of heterosexual incest content but, strictly speaking, I'll write the other two if the context or reader request is big enough", Lantz stated, frowning as he cracked the seal of the can of chocolate drink.

Gilgamesh stared at the man. "You wouldn't dare", he spat.

Lantz shrugged and, as he turned to the far wall, he said "I can't sing opera God damn it". The odd statement seemed to say “the topic is over, move along”.

"Welcome ladies and gentlemen, this is the Infinite Road, it's more or less a framing device that collided with my inner thought process. It's like Mystery Science Theater Three Thousand or the Super Mario Super Show. There's this segment and then a scene of some kind and then another scene like this and so on. The purposes of this thread should be clear by now but if you misread something feel free to ask in the thread, questions too but be polite and if you're going to text wall make sure the questions are defined clearly so I, or they, can answer them properly", he added, switching on the TV.

Scene one: God Hand Episode One

Twelve men had stood and eleven were dead.

Archer smirked in a grim way. "It seems like my attempt to save myself has created quite a mess...still...I can't say I regret it."

Archer's words were honored by the attention of the beast who stood before him. A mass of horror known as Neros Chaos, to call it an animal would be generous to it.

It laughed and spouted some drivel about its surprise at Archer's position,

Then, like Kirei Kotomine, he began to monologue at Archer about this and that. Archer had figured that it was trying to instill fear in him, but it was hard to scare a dead man, and Archer wasn't one to waste the opportunity.

Once he found that Archer was unafraid of his posturing, Chaos attacked in his usual way, the outcome of this was so obviously failure that it bears no need for description, if only to save the vampiric monster some face.

Unfortunately Chaos was not adept in the matters of Servants and so his next attack caused him to be caught by Archer's full brunt assault of replica weapons, which exploded on contact, engulfing Chaos and the hotel in a swath of light and pain.

As the six hundred and sixty six lives were extinguished along with two thirds of the hotel Archer knew that he would be blamed as a terrorist. He smiled at that, reputation didn't matter for him and so he could only smile from today's work. He had killed a monster, unlike a human there was no moral code nagging at him, no soul crushing compromise to repress for the sake of his path.

As he walked away from the rubble, Arcueid waved to him, smiling cheerfully.

Scene end.

"So it's not just the boy who gets all the women, it's his father as well?" Gilgamesh scoffed.

"Strictly speaking the point of eroge is exactly that, and I was the main character, after all", Archer laughed.

Lantz sighed. "First off, they are friends, secondly there's a long editorial reason for why Satoshi was featured as a character in that adult content and lastly. And, follow me here, fandoms are exceptionally terrible places in regards to character relationships. Harems are, in large part, bullshit. If Shirou picks Saber then it's unreasonable to expect the other characters to keep pining for his dick, the joke is old at minute eight, I don't need thirty chapters to draw it out, this is why the fandom for Sword Art Online and Love Hina suck. Look Kirito clearly likes Asuna, they got married, they had a kid, yes not physically but spirituality and they faced death together. Hell in the next arc he fights off a crazy mad scientist rapist arranged husband she was going to have to marry. Game over mother fucker, they be all but official.

And Keitaro, that fucker never paid attention to the rest even remotely and he marries Naru in the last volume. You can fight for your favorite girl all you want in a harem anime but being realistic in a story overall if she gets the guy or he gets the girl the rest of the cast is freed of the obligation to that main character. As such, other characters should be able to form relationships, but it's not like that. It's canon only, it has to be the safe accepted people, that's not how life works. If the relationships are believable then it shouldn't matter who the characters are, canon, fanon, original character or whomsoever."

Lantz grabbed another Yoohoo and opened it. "I'm a romantic, both in the romance context and in the adventure sense. I've been avoiding writing romance because of the nature of fandoms and the response I've gotten coupled with the sheer lack of good male characters in the Nasuverse. The whole thing just annoys me."

Saber stood up and looked from the three men to the wall. "Send questions and comments in the comments below, we'll try to answer in a timely manner."

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Lantz's fics / Re: Lantz's Fanfiction Contest
« on: March 31, 2015, 01:27:56 AM »
Contest now concludes entry portion on May 13

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Lantz's fics / Re: Lantz's Fanfiction Contest
« on: March 30, 2015, 10:41:46 PM »
Fine with me (No one actually asked to extend the deadline before now) what did you have in mind Mike?

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Lantz's fics / Re: Lantz's Fanfiction Contest
« on: March 29, 2015, 06:54:48 PM »
Kat, Puck. Since neither of you are here to be serious or enter the contest, leave this thread.

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Lantz's fics / Re: Lantz's Fanfiction Contest
« on: March 27, 2015, 10:12:04 PM »
The score is adjusted so that entries are not penalized one way or the other for the use of characters.

yes you need two ideas in two weeks in regards to prizes.

no Arch, the contest is not dead. Altima just decided to be his usual overzealous self. Two weeks means two weeks

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Lantz's fics / Re: Lantz's Fanfiction Contest
« on: March 25, 2015, 11:13:40 PM »
Stories without OC's have a score adjustment done during the final tally to determine the winner. Use of OCs or a lack thereof will not affect your ability to win.

submit the entry when you enter, which means when you've finished the work.

the prize request is part of the entry form.

if I don't have judges then I'll judge it myself if it comes to that.

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Lantz's fics / Lantz's Fanfiction Contest
« on: March 25, 2015, 07:25:33 PM »
Fan fiction contest rules and criteria.

 Rules

 1) From the beginning of the contest anyone who wants to enter has two weeks to do so.

 2) The entry form much be filled out in full or your entry will not be accepted.

 3) Good sportsmanship is key, if someone scores higher than you don't take it personally, attacking other contestants or the judges results in disqualification. The same goes for the judges should they choose to be overly critical or hurtful in their assessments. You can make your points without being pricks, that goes for both sides.

 4) Once the entry period is up judges have two weeks to judge entries (This deadline is expanded should the number of entries be significantly more than is reasonable to judge in that period) if left without a score the entry with be given an average as the third score, if only one judge manages to judge a particular work then their score becomes the sole basis for the final score.

 5) Have fun and be creative

 Criteria

 Readability: Grammar, Punctuation and so on. Readability is scored out of twenty points.

 Genre goal: How well your story fits the Genre, comedies should be funny, action stories thrilling, horror suspenseful and so on. Genre is scored out of forty points.

 Characterization: How accurately you portray the characters in canon and how you treat them (character bashing in example causes a reduction in points) characterization is scored out of a hundred points

 Community: How accurately you portray Fanon characters and Original Characters (OC's which are not yours are the only ones to qualify in this regard) Community is scored out of seventy five points

 Creativity: To quote the BNL "Its all been done before" Creativity is how you represent and spin obvious situations. In example, a battle between Kojiro and Saber or Archer and Gilgamesh, or a love confession etcetera. Creativity is scored out of fifty points.

 Uniqueness: Uniqueness is the measure of how your work is set apart from others. As with creativity it is scored out fifty.

 Appeal: Appeal is a measure of how a work appeals to a judge, it's entirely personal. It is scored out of five points

 Fun factor: How much you enjoyed reading the work. Fun factor is scored out of thirty points.

 Entry &Judge forms

 Entry

 Story Title:

 Genre: (Action, Drama, comedy, Lemon, Parody, Romantic, Slice of life etcetera or some combination thereof)

 Nasuverse works (KnK, Tsukihime etcetera or a combination of such)

 Route: (Pre VN, X Route etcetera)

 Prize request: (I'm a Writer, I'll write something if you win, That's all I can guarantee as a prize. If you'd prefer something else like art or such I can talk with some artists but no promises.)

 Judge

 Story Title:

 Readability (X of 20)

 Genre goal (X of 40)

 Characterization (X of 100)

 Community (X of 75)

 Creativity (X of 50)

 Uniqueness (X of 50)

 Appeal (X of 5)

 Fun factor (X of 30)

 Final points

 1) Betaing is 100% Ok, if not for the deadline I expect most if not all users would check their work. Assistance is allowed in this regard.

 2) Application for judge positions is done by posting a comment requesting to be a judge in this thread. I'll pick two people, no more. Should someone abdicate the position someone else will be chosen at that point.

 3)After the contest ends a public poll will be held so users can vote on what they thought the best fanfic of the contest was.

 4) In case my inbox fills up while I'm sleeping or you find yourself unable to PM me for whatever reason. Go register at Darkside of the Moon and PM Cherry lover, he'll get them to me in case of an emergency like last minute deadlines and so on. PM's only, no google docs (my platform has problems with them) you must pm your entry to me or failing that Mike on DSM to qualify.

 Judges

 lantzblades

 Entries

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Lantz's fics / Re: Shattered heroics new world
« on: March 24, 2015, 05:11:31 AM »
Vote closed, three is the winner, update soon

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Lantz's fics / Re: shattered heroics defenders
« on: March 24, 2015, 05:10:47 AM »
Vote closed, two is the winner. Update soon.

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Lantz's fics / Re: shattered heroics defenders
« on: March 20, 2015, 02:00:53 AM »
Choice three:

I run after Satoshi.

"What do you mean by other self? Why can't you stay to help us? I need more information", I say.

Satoshi laughs. "Shirou Emiya is a hero of justice, a man who loves and is loved by all his friends. You don't need more information than that. But, I'll say this, this world's me is likely stuck in a little model shop called Sanada's. If not, then check a restaurant or café.

I have to go because I'm not of this world group, I just thought I should stop something bad. After all, as well intentioned as he is, this conqueror me is making war to achieve a fascist peace", he replies with a wave and, in an instant, he and his friends are gone in a burst of light.

I tear open the letter carefully as I head inside. Reading the letter carefully, I find myself smiling.

"To my dearest friend and beloved father, Shirou Emiya.

I am but one possible future child of yours, I've met others in my travels but that's neither here nor there. I write this to you so that you understand the coming storm, I was raised in a world of light and hope, evil was mostly stragglers and over-confident magi and a handful of weak monsters left from a great push from my extended family.

I never worried for anything, but when I left on a journey I found that other worlds were less accepting, or were ready to believe compromise was preferable to maintaining hope. The me writing to you now defeated that cynicism with the help of those I love, but the me you shall face (they call him the Sun Lord, ugh) fell into despair over the truths of these worlds and is desperate to save them.

I do not ask that you show mercy, but I hope you do not hate him. As for the spell, it's a bonding spell, unlike the one used by the Sun Lord it does not generate effects, it merely advances and shares abilities and strength based on the bond between participants. Basically friendship equals power, love too. So, go eclipse the Sun Lord with the power of friendship!

Best of luck, Satoshi Emiya.

Post script, this world's me isn't as on-target as me, um, he might get a bit silly, sorry.

Post post script. Gilgamesh will be brought back, so, that's going to be a thing. Again sorry, just how the spell works", it read.

Gilgamesh aside, I get the feeling that my son is not hampered by social expectations. That makes me happy, at least.

Arriving in the living room, I find Rin and the others having some kind of panicked conversation over the letter Rin was given.

1) Ask to see the letter.

2) Ask what's going on.

3) Make lunch.

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Lantz's fics / Re: Shattered heroics new world
« on: March 20, 2015, 01:59:18 AM »
Choice one.

Archer can wait. I run after and catch Sion by the arm. She turns, puzzled and, in that moment, I press my lips to hers.

She's stiff, but only for a moment, before she melts and we trade passionate kisses, embracing tightly.

Instead of explaining, I just take Sion by the hand and take her with me to the party room. A huge bed adorned with purple sheets and curtains awaits us. On either side of the bed stand the always-lovely Leysritt and Sella.

The two first started coming to these infrequent gatherings as a means to gain prana for Ilyaviel and, subsequently, Berserker. Eventually, it became a social function for them. Sella persists that it is merely duty, but Leysritt is quite open about the truth. It makes me happy that the two are enjoying themselves rather than doing it out of obligation.

In the moments my eyes were away from her, Sion has seen fit to dress down to nothing but her beret, white socks and a somewhat large, black strap-on. Despite the sour look on her face, her cheeks are a bright red. Having known her this long, I'm sure she'll take that strap-on and use one of the girls as stress relief.

Apparently speaking of the devil is not the only way to make her appear, as Sakura comes into the room dressed in elegant silk. Her dress makes her look good but, then, anything purple looks good on her.

Behind her, on their knees, are Satsuki and Rider, both naked save for the collars and leashes attached to them. Sakura approaches me with Satsuki in tow, while Sion takes the opportunity to start molesting Rider with her hands.

"I've brought you these appetizers to snack on Satoshi, enjoy them before the main course", Sakura says, her hands pulling away what little fabric covering her neither region and spreading her soft folds.

Food analogy aside, they do unleash a hunger in me, and I'm inclined to feed it. First, though, I need to defuse Sion's obvious attempts at a take-over. Taking the leash from Sakura, I raise Satsuki upright. The vampire girl is usually eager to wrap her body around mine but, before she can, I kiss her softly and we begin caressing each other tenderly as our lips meet over and over. Were we alone, this would be the part where we look at each other softly and Satsuki would slide me inside her waiting slit in her own, cute way.

She wants it and so do I, but I resist the urge and lick her earlobe, our signal to silently say, its OK, drink. Satsuki takes the hint and slips her fangs into my neck. She drinks deep, and I slip away for a moment. Regaining myself, I find Sella staring down at me.

The shock of release silences my obvious question and, turning my head, I see Leysritt's massive love pillows covered in my warm juice, as she continues to massage my manhood.

Naked, with my head in Sella's equally naked lap, I relax despite Leysritt's enthusiastic attentions to my throbbing heat. Turning to the group, I find Satsuki with a fist full of Sion's hair, forcing her to attend her slit. The double-sided strap-on is now firmly resting in the alchemist's ass and pussy. Somehow, Sakura has been stripped and restrained in the chaos I missed, her thick heart-shaped butt wiggles in a cute way as she gasps. Satsuki flips the switch on a device in her hand, and a moment later the loud whirring noise of several vibrators erupts, seemingly coming from inside Sakura.

"Oh god please, turn it off, it's too much", Sakura cries.

Satsuki laughs and does the exact opposite, jamming the toys to maximum before retrieving a hard, thick wooden paddle from the depths beyond my sight.

A moan erupts from Sakura as the paddle strikes her voluptuous behind. It's rough but not uncaring, and that's why Sakura likes it. We do not treat her as frail or weak and so she gives herself to us freely.

Satsuki continues to harshly strike Sakura's bottom, but Rider interrupts my view. Despite the blindfold hiding her eyes from me, I can tell Rider wants my blood, at least more than the bit Satsuki undoubtedly gave her. Before she can be given or steal it, however, the maids go on the offensive, seeing me as theirs for the time being.

Sella pushes Rider off balance and Leysritt grabs her from behind, pressing her breasts into Rider's back while taking hold of Rider's nipples. A soft tug later has Rider paralyzed, an unspoken agreement to be good and wait her turn.

Sakura screams again as the hard wood meets her voluptuous bottom. It hurts, certainly, but Sakura likes it. After all, if she didn't she would use her safe word. At least I hope so, despite her assurances I'm ever worried about her getting hurt, not physically but emotionally. I honestly hope I'm worried for nothing.

The maids take my moment of reflection to present Rider as a gift. Her slender arms are bound together behind her back with leather around her wrists, her palms set flat against the ground to support her weight. Leather straps descending from the ceiling support her legs individually at the ankle, and her legs have been spread wide apart, giving me a perfect view of her shaved slit. Amidst Sakura's moans and screams of pleasure I approach Rider. Drinking in her beautiful form, I cannot help but smile in a slightly perverted way.

"Rider, you've allowed me to be your lover for your master's sake. Can you disregard that obligation finally and allow our relationship to grow?" I ask.

Rider's face becomes a soft pinkish-red. It's not the most elegant way to ask, but I think it's less cheesy than saying “I love you, please allow me to prove my conviction in this way”, or something like that. Before she can answer me, a sharp laugh erupts from Satsuki, drawing our attention.

There, still being worked over by Satsuki, is Sion. Her face is buried in Satsuki's crotch and her neithers are still occupied by the double-sided strap-on. I should take care of that but, on cue, Rider replies. At first, her words are inaudible to me but, suddenly, she repeats them more forcefully.

"Fuck me hard and dirty damn it!" she yells, squirming.

Rider, like me, has hidden her feelings it seems. In the face of such a demand I cannot refuse, Sion will have to endure Satsuki's extremes for just this once.

Sella spreads Rider open and begins playing with her clit in a rough way. Rider's cries are cute and, without hesitation, I enter her, burying myself at deeply as I can manage, first inside her and then between her sizable fun pillows. Her heat squeezes around my steeled sword and, as we melt together inside, our breathing becomes matched.

"If I can still walk straight after, I'm going to disappointed", Rider says.

"What is this 'after' you speak of?" I ask, eliciting a laugh from her.

"I'll hold you to that if you're not careful, now pound me like a hammer", she retorts, moaning softly.

I begin roughly sucking her nipples, flicking and tweaking them softly just to see her squirm. Her soft moans clash with Sakura's sharp ones each time the paddles cracks against her rear. Rider's lips purse and, trembling ever so slightly, I begin to thrust inside her.

Small moans come from Rider, at first uncontrollable, like hiccups. Selfishly, my pride acknowledges my name among the cute noises. The world shuts off for a minute, and there's only Rider and I doing this perverted waltz until I release inside her, causing her to scream in ecstasy, drowning out Sakura's own passionate cries. All eyes are on us, and Rider, whether through lust or embarrassment, snaps her bonds and wraps her arms and legs around me.

With her face buried in my neck I'm able to see where the maids got to. Sella and Leysritt are there beside Sakura, the former removing the vibrators from the overworked woman and the latter satiating her oral fixation by having Sakura felate a Sushi roll. I imagine that Sakura had some food sex thing planned, before Satsuki took over that is.

Rider's nips my ear. "Thank you", she whispers.

I don't think it was much at all, but as long as she's happy, that is all that matters. Letting her down to sit on the table we part from our embrace. I miss her warmth already, but Sakura needs some meat to go with that rice.

Leysritt pulls the wet roll out of Sakura's mouth with a sloppy noise which only makes me more eager. Then, she moves behind Sakura and takes the paddle from the barely-attentive Satsuki.  Sakura looks up at me, hungry, but with her arms and legs taped together she can't move far enough to reach me.

Looking closer, I can see that Sakura now has a vibrator on either side of each nipple, held on by strips of tape stuck to either side of her breast and the nipple itself. Attached as they are, it will certainly hurt when the tape is removed, especially her nipples, although that's likely the point. Suddenly, Sakura yelps and crawls towards me, passively. Leysritt, the cause of Sakura's pain, holds the oversized paddle at the ready for another swipe.

The low hum of the egg-shaped toys hits my ears as the intoxicating, electric warmth of her breath reaches my divine sword. I grasp the tape on her right breast with my left hand and the back of her head with my right. Sakura looks up at me, she's expecting, wanting what comes next, but still I wait. Fed up from the tension, Sakura tries to move on her own, and that is when I strike.

Tearing the tape from her breast so suddenly causes her to scream, and that's when I thrust her head down on to my waiting manhood. Gagging slightly, she tries to pull back. I'm willing to let her, but Leysritt will have no such thing and strikes Sakura's already-red bottom with thunderous force, strong enough to split the paddle down the middle.

Instead of screaming, Sakura tightens her throat around me. The look in her eyes is predatory, I would say she had bested me if not for the feel of her lips against me.

The silence is unbearable for just a moment then, skilfully, Sakura begins to polish my rod. I explode almost instantly, splattering her throat with my seed. She swallows and continues her task, clearly wanting me to suffer the build-up as punishment for leaving her alone all this time.

I look to Satsuki, still firmly enamored with Sion, and am immediately punished as Sakura intensifies her attack, pulling away to leave only the tip inside her.

Her eyes remain locked on mine as the pleasure overwhelms me, but she's careful not to let me cum until I look truly frustrated.

With a smile, she pulls off me in an instant, causing me to cover her face this time. Sakura grins smugly, knowing she's won, and licks the cum from her lips.

"Next time let's make this private", she says, leaving me to my own devices.

Before I deal with Satsuki, I tear the tape from Sakura's other breast, to teach her not to say such things and that I'm the boss here. As she begins awkwardly trying to massage her breast, I turn to the monster I have unleashed.

Sion is stuck between Satsuki's legs, helpless against the lust-crazed girl. Luckily, she isn't paying attention to anything but her prey. I slip behind her and, with a handful of the cool lotion from the bottle on the dresser I move quickly, slipping my fingers into her rear, which causes her to yelp in surprise. Satsuki drops Sion as she turns her head towards me but, unfortunately for her, she's too late, and I plunge my throbbing heat into her firm, waiting ass. Her eyes widen but, before she can say a word, I start pumping her furiously. The next ten minutes are a blur filled with Satsuki's pleasure-filled screams.

With Satsuki a near-comatose mess of bodily fluids and lube, I take Sion's hand and lead her away to get cleaned up. The shower is quiet, save for a bit of light petting as we wash ourselves. I suppose I'll have to attend to the day's chores and affairs after all. Ruling sucks sometimes, especially when you don't know what ought to be most important.

1) Go to the church.

2) Go to the treasury.

3) Go to bed.

4) Go and see Alter.

5) Go to deal with Rin.

6) Go to the medical services area.

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Lantz's fics / Re: Gamma Tales:Excuse me, but I don't care
« on: February 19, 2015, 09:03:18 PM »
Given that Doujinshi means fan comic yes, although I include those weird image series ntr/rape things as well.

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