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Fate's Mirror: Fortune and Favour

This is an interactive fan fiction. The characters of the Nasuverse (along with fan characters, OCs, genderswaps etcetera) are all trapped in a large facility, complete with all the amenities needed for normal living.

Their time in the facility is divided into two categories, daily life and deadly life. In the former characters carry on in a slice-of-life manner, socializing and the like. In the latter characters fight for their lives (unlike situations like dangan ronpa however it is not against each other). The survival and relationships of the characters depend on you, the voters.

However, in addition to the usual voting process, each voter chooses characters to support. In helping Shirou succeed, the chosen characters get points, with enough points you can improve their relationship with other characters, and encourage romance and the like.

The relationships assist survival in deadly life as bonuses to the character's abilities and in recovery in the case they fail. Should they fail too many times they will be confronted by Satsujinki and given one final chance to escape death, should they fail this then they die permanently.

The objective is for the characters to survive until they can escape the facility.


The mechanics

Alongside their first vote, each player submits a list of six female characters that they wish to support. Note that, once submitted, this can not be changed, so choose carefully.

Choosing the correct option in a vote gets you a point for each character you support. For every ten points a given character obtains, that character's supporters get to choose an event, action or special scene (lemon, comedic, action etcetera) involving them.

Additionally to this, a character's points are also used to develop relationships between them and other characters (both male and female). These relationships give them a bonus to their survival rolls in the deadly life chapters. There are seven relationship levels for each pairing, and for every ten points assigned to the pairing by a character's supporters, the relationship level advances by one (for female/female pairings, the relationship level can be increased by either character's supporters and is shared between the characters, but the ten points needed to increase the level must all come from the supporters of one character).

The relationship levels are as follows:

1. Acquaintance.
2. Friend.
3. Buddy.
4. Best Friend.
5. More than friends.
6. Interested.
7. Romantically Involved.

On reaching the final level, a vote will be held amongst the character's supporters to see if they should pursue a romantic relationship with the character in question (subject to sexuality, compabitility with any existing relationships they may have and, in the case of a female partner, acceptance by the partner's supporters). If the supporters vote against, then no relationship is formed, but the relationship level and associated bonus is still increased.

The story is split into acts. In each act, there are a minimum of three chapters for daily life, and anything from one to six for deadly life. For the deadly life sections, six female characters are chosen from the 30 available using a table and a six-sided dice, and they, together with the male characters, have to fight for their survival.

To survive, the character has to score a roll of 15 or higher (after relationship bonuses) on a 20-sided dice. Male characters have to survive one such roll per act, whilst the chosen female characters must survive three. Each character has ten hit points, and every roll they fail causes them to take damage.

Finally, every character has a synergy with certain others, based on their personal preferences and those of the other character. If these characters are together in deadly life then they get an additional bonus (depending on their relationship level), helping them to survive peril.


The cast

Guys

Shirou
Archer
Shinji
Gilgamesh
Satoshi
Lancer

Girls

Arcuied
Ciel
Akiha
Hisui
Kohaku
Satsuki
Sion
Dust of Osiris
Mecha Hisui
Saber
Rin
Sakura
Rider (Medusa)
Caster (Medea)
Ayako
Bazzet
Caren
Sella
Leysritt
Rin (Extra)
Saber (Nero)
Rider (Drake)
Caster (Tamano)
Archerko (Swords dancers Ilya)
Emilya (heavens failure Shirou)
Fem Gilgamesh
Fem Archer
Fem Lancer
Fem Shirou
Fem Kirei


Index:

Prologue:
Choice one - this post.
Choice two
Choice three
Choice four
Choice five

Prologue

"Well, what are you waiting for kid? Use that healing power to wake him up", a familiar voice says, stirring me from sleep.

"Avalon isn't an alarm clock old man. Nothing is wrong with Shirou, we just have to wait", a voice replies, clearly irritated. Even without seeing the two I figure the "old man" must have said it to intentionally piss off the younger man.

Pushing past the odd desire I have to sleep, I force my eyes open and look around, noting that I appear to be in a classroom.

Archer is there, staring at me with irritated relief. He is talking to another man, a blonde, green-eyed man dressed in a pair of black jeans, white sneakers and a black tee shirt sporting a logo consisting of a silver S inside some kind of shield. I feel I've seen the logo before, but I can't place it with my head feeling so heavy.

Archer pulls me up. Normally I would fight him, or at least make a remark or such, but I'm still woozy.

The two take me to a room, where a bunch of people are gathered with Rin and another black haired girl in front of a white board. Looks like a meeting, I guess.

Who should we view the meeting with?

1) Shirou

2) Archer

3) Satoshi

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Lantz's fics / Swords and sorcery primer.
« on: April 02, 2014, 07:14:32 AM »
Swords and sorcery primer.

Well this is a discussion for swords and sorcery, the chronological version. However before we start discussion I feel that I need to make a few things absolutely clear.

Firstly, I perceive the nasuverse as no different than a comic book, unlike the routes which adhere to the style of the novels this story is treated like a comic book.

I can already hear doubts and outrage about this claim and style choice but I'll explain. Plenty of the characters already use the superhero and villain creation formulas present in comics and what's more the nasuverse runs on the same situational combat mechanism all comics adhere to. Furthermore the fights themselves are utterly ridiculous as comic fight and ignore physics just as much if not more. And especially in the case of FSN the main hero follows the western idea of super heroism (we debated the subject back on the proboards) so styling the story like a comic book fits.

On to the second matter. Spoilers, I hate them, I do not see the point in giving them out, the point of a story is to read it. As such, should I tell you it's a spoiler then leave it at that and wait for the answer.

Thirdly, insults and disrespectful behavior are not something I will put up with, if you call names, rage post or use the term Mary sue in here your questions will no longer be accepted or answered. This may seems harsh but frankly we are all mature people and as such should be able to discuss things properly.

Fourth, the point of fan fiction is fun. If you are just here to nit pick, bitch or criticize then I suggest you go elsewhere.

Fifth, the story is one containing time travel, Multi-dimensional travel and yes a trip to the root. If you can't stand alternate history, time paradoxes or interpretation then get out of dodge now.

Sixith, big cast, if you don't like rolling epic stories with a lot of characters then now is the time to exit.

Seventh, the meaning of my works at large is hope and triumph despite the odds. I enjoy stories where despite the odds the good guys can succeed, where the reader can cheer because the tension means something more than "oh god Kohaku doesn't remember her own name" or such that makes the reader feel like shit. Positivity, in a word, is my theme for this story. Don't like it don't read.

Eighth, I am aware of the inconsistencies in canon, some are age, others are intentionally part of the plot. In either case they make the story hit the mark of silver age sensibilities better so I won't be changing the story as I post it. I accepted a lot of feedback and did plenty of research (a year and a half time wise) after playing the games. The story is what it is, if you don't like it, well, sorry but I'm not changing it.

Ninth, in regards to the adult content stuff, while it isn't directly related I feel that explaining why he's used is important since "Of flesh and Fantasy" is a parody based on swords and sorcery. I use him because of the serious lack of decent male characters in the nasuverse. Shinji is right out for 99.9% of character relationships because well dude is a right douche. I can't use Shiki (god I've tried) because stepping into his shoes is, well, fucking disturbing, he's a great character but I write adult content from the male perspective and last time I tired with Shiki I nearly broke a chair. Even if it were possible, I'd have a seriously difficult time pairing him with anyone but Kohaku. Lancer in similar with respect to Bazzet, I can write him but I just think Bazzet deserves him. Arihiko, Issei, fall short because of a lack of personality outside of friend guy of the main character. The mc from extra is, boy or girl, a player insert, too much of the character is fluid to use. Gilgamesh is well Gilgamesh, no sale sir. Berserker, Zouken and Kirei are all creepy for different reasons and chaos, ewww. So it leaves Shirou and Archer, not a lot of variety or connect to over 70% of the female characters. So I use Satoshi  because I like the three act structure.

Tenth, their are references everywhere in my work, if you don't like that then too bad, bad puns, naming conventions and titles are full of that stuff.

now with this all said I have three final things to say.

1) Until I post the first chapter of the new format please refrain from discussion of the story and characters. I will notify in this thread when it has been posted.

2) there will be a character primer up like the found in comics to index the facts about the characters at the time. That thread is a no post zone, it is for updates by me only to leave a concise index

3) I'll be holding a contest at some point regarding point ten, dunno what the prize will be yet.

ask about the points made for now if you have questions and please be civil.

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Role Playing / Lords of fate signup and discussion
« on: January 27, 2014, 12:21:48 AM »
Lords of fate: a tale of blood and hope in the hot midday sun

 On a continent surrounded by islands away from the reach of ordinary men a battle has begun for control of the world. One kingdom now three have summoned from beyond time and space heroes to aid their goals. The Lion, the Lily or the Dragon, which will you support?

 The Rules

 1) I am the Game Master, what this means is I am the ultimate authority for the game. My rulings are law. To this end if you have issues with other players either in game or the discussion thread then you bring to me and if I am unable to get it resolved then I take it to the mods myself. Going over my head will result in you being booted from the game for defying the trust required for the game.

 2) No godmoding, characters aren’t perfect

 3) Characters can die, if you do don’t take it hard it’s a game and we’ll figure out something for you to if you would like to continue playing with the rest.

 4) Keep your in character knowledge away from your out of character knowledge. You will be penalized I catch you using things you shouldn’t know in character

 How it’ll work

 The game will be done with a posting order (with me at the top) Players play a single character (either forum member or canon character) any canon characters not played by players will be incidental and only appear should they be sought out (except the Sabers) forum members are themselves with all their knowledge

 Battle

 Players state their intent and I role opposing twenty sided die and then post the result of the actions based on the result of the die.

 Here’s the table

 1= fumble, a fumble is something bad that will happen. This can be anything from dropping a weapon, tripping or having a spell fizzle

 2-9= miss/fail. Your action misses it’s intended target or otherwise fails. It’s not a bad result simply not ideal

 10-14= hit/success. The barest margin of success, you succeed at your intent be it attack or otherwise.

 15-19=Solid hit/good success. As with 10-14 except the result is simply better

 20=perfect strike /perfect success. The attack/task is performed exactly as intended and has a further chance at a critical success or failure

 A critical success is achieved by rolling 15 or higher after rolling a 20 a critcal success improves a result by twice the intended result.

 A critical failure is achieved by rolling a 1 after rolling a 20. It is a spectacular failure ruining a task completely or harming the character who failed

 Instant kill/ultimate success. This is achieved by rolling a 20 then another 20 and then a successive 15. As the name implies it’s the best possible outcome for any action.

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Help and Support / geekmecca.com
« on: December 14, 2013, 11:06:36 AM »
Ok so when I go to access the first page of the character page for cross effects it prompts me to enter a password and sign in to geekmecca.com, I was easily able to back out by cancelling but what the hell is this? Is anyone else having this issue?

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Role Playing / Dark Side of the Moon: welcome to the dungeon crawl
« on: November 15, 2013, 04:14:57 AM »
Alright well after all the commotion I decided to create a D&D game. While the materials are not yet complete  I'll be giving out the basic details.

the game is most similar to the original dungeons and dragons. I as game master will handle the game's mechanical side (rolling die to determine success or failure as in dungeons and dragons)

no evil characters.

no halflings

no paladins.

the game is set for 2 to 5 players.

Absolutely no player killing or you will be black listed.

health is rolled at level one.

finally

as I have had serious issues with him regarding this subject matter all players are welcome to join EXCEPT Arch.

further details to be announced.

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Fanfiction / Trouble with Titles: Help and Advice for Titling Fiction
« on: November 11, 2013, 03:54:06 AM »
I myself along with several other authors I know have  trouble with titles. In this thread I hope to collectively assist others in titling stories  when they unable to do so. Unlike the fanfic ideas thread the purpose of this thread is to discuss and form titles for impending or theoretical works.

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Fanfiction / the OC corner
« on: November 10, 2013, 07:44:07 PM »
This is a place for the presentation and discussion of original characters in the nasuverse. Satoshi is one of mine but I know there are others out there.

I want to be clear that this thread is to be a safe place, be polite, respectful and accept that the answers you receive are not always going to be the one you want, accept them gracefully  and do not cause a scene because you disagree with interpretations.

I will present my characters later but for the moment I am somewhat out of touch on pain killers.

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Fanfiction / ero&lemon discussion
« on: November 10, 2013, 07:36:07 PM »
Given that Fate and Tsukihime is an ero novel I thought it's high time we had a discussion regarding lemons. From the novel itself to what you want to read pairing wise from other writers on site or in general.

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Fanfiction / Your writing style and you.
« on: November 10, 2013, 07:31:30 PM »
It occurs to me that we've never had a discussion about the whys and hows of writing fan fiction. So I'd like to know why you guys write the way you do. What are your objectives, habits preferred or native styles and characters, settings or genre of stories you like to read and/or write.

in my case a I write for others mostly  I take requests and have a native style of second person as I started writing to be a dungeon master for my friends when we play D&D.

I like writing fun before accurate and love giving lesser known characters moments of awesome.

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Lantz's fics / hotel love (lemon)
« on: November 01, 2013, 05:09:45 PM »
Purple eyes filled with unease look away from me, and her purple hair sways at the small of her back.

 Shinjiko Matou- she’s small, but if I understood what I choked out of that wormy bastard Zouken before I splattered him, she’s sturdy, as she had been given the treatment with the worms in a round about way, to give Shinjiko her adopted brother’s magic circuits. The worm had then planned to kill her and take over her body.

 I stopped Zouken from killing them, of course, but Sakurai can't use magic any more. Now we’ve stopped in at this hotel to finish purifying her body through the use of Avalon via sex.

 I sit down on the bed and gently wrap my arms around her soft naked form, pulling her onto my lap. She lets out a surprised gasp, then goes quiet as our eyes meet. Neither of us are virgins, but this is probably her first time that hasn’t been a forced, emotionally crippling mess.

 I’ll make it special for her- it’s the least I can do to ease her wounded heart. I slowly trace her jaw line with my fingers. She shivers cutely as my fingers reach her hair, and I pull her into a long deep kiss.

 Her eyes glass over slightly as she smiles, trying to catch her breath. She returns the kiss; it’s shorter, and filled with hunger this time. Her body remembers this, and enjoys it. Our stomachs press against each other as she slides forward, wrapping her arms around me, gently guiding me to her small perky breasts.

 I smile inwardly. Tt's cute how she wants to be in charge. I slowly begin licking her nipples in long strokes before pressing my lips to them and sucking her breasts, hard, causing her to moan loudly and shiver.

 I'm hard from her cries, and Shinjiko stays mesmerized by my attentions, until my hot thickness rubs against her bottom. Her eyes light up. Shinjiko pushes me to the bed and shifts so her silt is over me and her face is between my legs.

“Toshi-kun’s thing so big. Does it hurt? If you ask nicely, nurse Shinjiko can make it better,” she teases, as her tongue moves slowly from my base to the tip. I could resist, but in the end, I want my pay-off.

“Oh yes, Nurse, please. It aches so much,” I reply, almost breaking into a laugh.

 Satisfied with my submission, her rich purple eyes focus on my throbbing heat. I hear her lick her lips, and she swallows the head greedily and begins sucking, hard, covering my member in saliva. As she swirls her tongue quickly around, peeling back the skin with the tip of her tongue, she clamps her lips down. She begins to suck harder, as she starts swallowing me, inch by inch, stopping near the base and gripping and stroking what’s left with one hand, while the other moves lower and begins to massage my balls tenderly.

 My breathing sharpens and Shinjiko increases her efforts, until I explode in her mouth. She coughs, turning her head to look at me, her face soaked with my cum. She smiles as she shows me the juice she collected, then swallows, and turns back to my throbbing meat stick.

 Before she can start attending me again, I capitalize on her daze, and bury my face in her dripping wet pink hole, smacking her ass once, as I start to lick her feverishly. She cries out and her moans become louder and louder, paralyzed by my abrupt attentions.

 Her hands grip the sheets and she tries desperately to fight back and wrest control from me. As I pause for a breath, Shinjiko finds her chance, wrapping her lips around my throbbing heat once again, and sucks hard, taking me all the way to the base, then pulling off the moment she's about to climax.

 The sudden release of her soft lips causes me to explode, covering her face and breasts in my warm white seed. Shinjiko smiles, turning to face me, licking her lips and swallowing, before kissing me and stroking my heat possessively.

 Her eyes are alight with passion as she grinds her dripping pink lips on the tip of my thick sword, before sheathing it in a single motion. Her screams echo from the room’s walls, and her hot wetness clings desperately to my thickness.

 After a stunned moment she begins to move; quickly at first, side to side, then back and forth, before pulling out until only the tip remains inside, then swallowing it completely to the base with a sloppy hard wet sound. Shinjiko moans and drools, pulling out to the tip and slamming down to the base repeatedly, until I cum again inside her. The clinging stops until my load finishes then returns hotter then before.

 She keeps riding me until her hole is over flowing with my seed, and then she rises off me, my last spurt drenching her breasts again. Shinjiko cleans herself off with her tongue, then attends to me, polishing my sword.

The purple haired girl works me over and just as I’m about to go off again, the door bursts open and in storm Arc, Rider and Ayako. The sudden intrusion causes Shinjiko to pull back from me, and get another face full of my love juice.

 Ayako turns a deep shade of red and covers her face while Rider and Arc glance at Shinjiko’s satisfied, cum-soaked form, then at each other, and then at me, licking their lips.

 I think they'd been planning on jumping me before this. These two might just run me dry. Ayako turns and tries to leave, but Rider gets in her way, tangling herself with the girl, and coils around Ayako’s body, gripping her both firmly and gently, in one motion. Judging by her face I’d say Rider is whispering some rather naughty thing to the school girl. It’s entertaining, but I have to stop staring because Arc's already gone.

 I don’t get the chance to change focus before I’m pushed onto my back, and Arc’s form appears, pawing, now skirt-less, at my throbbing member.

 Arc then grips my heat at the base, looking at Shinjiko. “So this thing made her make a face like that, huh? It’s big with a strong scent…” she mutters, licking it from base to tip in a cat like fashion.

 Her selfish possessive manner is somewhat annoying, despite the wonderful attention she's is giving me. But as she slides off the bed to her knees between my legs, allowing me to sit up and meet those excited, innocent, happy, cat-like eyes, my annoyance fades, and I return her playful grin.

 Arc’s eyes lock on to mine, pulling me in as she takes my head into her mouth and sucks the tip, hard, teasing the hole with her tongue before swallowing more and more of my heat until it reaches the back of her throat.

 She swallows, causing her throat to tighten, and caresses my member roughly, making me moan unexpectedly, and Arc’s eyes to light up. The top-heavy vampire pulls off my member and removes her snow white sweater and black bra, revealing her naked milky white breasts.

 Arc makes a playful face as she takes her perky soft breasts in her hands and engulfs my polished sword between them. She begins by slowly stroking up and down my throbbing heat, getting faster after each lick and kiss of my tip.

 Eventually, the attentions from the body that would put the Venus to shame become too much, and I explode, covering her milky white skin with my hot seed. Her breasts are drenched, and it’s dripping from her chin as she smiles and stands up.

 The blonde vampire bends over, placing a hand against the wall, and then looks back at me, smiling mischievously and spreading her legs, using her free hand to spread her soft wet pink lips.

 As I stand, her eyes flash to a bright gold, and everything's confusing for a moment. When I have everything sorted out, my hands are gripping her hips and I’m buried deep inside her. I've apparently been doing it for a while, because Arc's screaming loudly, her hands braced against the wall, and a naked Ayako and a recovered Shinjiko are on their fronts, watching with hungry, but barely aware eyes, as Rider, lying on top of the two, attends them by roughly fingering their holes. Rider is such a pimp.

“Hey! Don't slow down now!” Arc cries out, and I realise I've slowed enough to almost come to a halt, watching Rider at work. She notices me watching, winks, then lowers her head, hair trailing over her perfect form and the two girls, and whispers to them. She does something below, and the two girls convulse, Ayako burying her face in the soft sheets, Shinjiko screaming at the top of her lungs.

 I'd like to watch more, but ignoring Arc would be a bad idea. Turning back to her shivering body, I start moving again inside her warm juicy tunnel. It’s incredibly tight- as though she were a virgin- but as I thrust, it parts easily, squeezing down as I settle. It’s slick but clinging to me greedily as I thrust harder and harder, her moans giving way to soft whimpers.

 The girls are talking about Arc’s body now, and although I can’t concentrate on the whole conversation, I do catch the part about Arc’s ass, and I have to agree, it’s perfectly smackable.

 Arc moves with me, the heat building up at the point of our connection. Reaching back to wind up I smack her ass, and we cum together, hard, causing the lovely princess to collapse to her knees dripping my seed from her battered hole.

 I barely manage to breathe a sigh before Shinjiko pulls me into a sitting position on the bed and, without delay, begins to clean my member roughly, sucking all the mixed juices off it.

 She slides off my thick throbbing manhood with a sloppy popping sound, then swallows, kissing me hard, as Rider sits on my lap with her back to me, driving my heat right into her tight ass.

 Shinjiko moves behind me, breasts pressing against my back, and starts to rub my shoulders as Rider increases her pace, riding me roughly. Looking past Rider, I understand why she chose anal. Ayako is on her knees, shyly licking Rider’s pussy, as Rider covers Ayako’s face in her juices.

 I’m tempted to let Rider have her fun, but by my nature, I can’t let Ayako be left helpless. Rider continues to ride me, hard and fast, and as she goes to pull off my member, I grab her hips, trip her feet out from under her, and drive her down onto my base, and her ass clenches so tightly around me I think she might cut off the blood to my member.

 Rider’s switch is flipped as I throb inside her, and her breath becomes ragged. I catch her hands and grip them behind her back as she rides my thick heat, panting like dog, and crying out.

 Ayako cleans her face off as she stands, free from Rider’s lustful direction. Ayako’s actually rather cute, now that I take a good look. Her face is red and her eyes dance as I massage Rider’s ample breasts in front of her.

 Rider ramps up the pace of her attentions, sliding fast and hard, up and down my member, until she comes down, hard, and tightens, forcing my load into her perfect ass. Rider convulses, stiff and twitching, then collapses, panting.

 I’m surprised, and a little embarrassed, that I’ve done so well, actually. I'd expected her to already have tied me to the bed and the others tied up in bondage gear by now. I gently slip out of Rider, lay her down on the bed and head to the shower to clean up.

 The water’s still hot and as I finish washing up, I turn to get out, and am greeted by a nervous and slightly confused Ayako. Her deep brown eyes dart back and forth between the floor and my eyes, and... other places.

“Uh… Satoshi, they... That is, Rider t-told me you’re Emiya’s... That is, Shirou’s son. Is that, um… true?” she asks, with a mixture of nervousness and worry on her face.

 I nod and pull her into the shower, causing her face to become beet red. Ayako’s arms cling to my shoulders tightly as I pull her close.

“I’m not usually like this Satoshi-kun. But Rider is just so...” I cut her explanation short by pressing my lips to hers. Ayako’s eyes widen and she gasps as my hard thickness presses against her shaven slit. Her eyes are unfocused, and she looks at me silently, a question on her lips that I’m all too happy to answer.

“I would be honoured,” I tell her pulling her into an open mouth kiss. Ayako’s breathing gets sharper as we exchange kisses in the hot mist of the shower. Gathering some courage, she takes the soap and lathers up, then, inexpertly, starts to grind her lovely body against mine.

 We continue trading kisses and exploring each others bodies until she nips my ear.

“Come, Toshi-kun. Fill me.”

I lift her up and kiss her passionately as she wraps her legs around my waist. Her smell, mixed with the heat, encourages me, and I nip her neck gently as we slide together, moaning loudly, from the juicy heat.

 I begin thrusting roughly as we melt together kissing, sucking and nipping playful at each other. Ayako’s different, and I know I shouldn’t, but she’s so hot and soft inside that I can’t help myself, and I cum inside her precious place, filling her up till it drips from her pink silt.

 Cleaning up again, we exchange warm kisses and step out of the shower returning to the party, who seem to have co-opted another room’s showers to clean up. Not surprising given the perpetrators.

 I would continue to stay with the ladies and service them, but I have another engagement at the moment, with a certain red haired teacher. I bid them a soft goodbye, and kiss each in turn, checking to see if the human girls are all right, before leaving.

“No, Ayako not there! Oh god, wait!” Rider cries out as I shut the room door.

It looks like she’s gained a bit of confidence and decided to return the teasing Rider gave her earlier. I look forward to rubbing it in when I see Rider later.

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Lantz's fics / mega pack #1 (lemon)
« on: November 01, 2013, 04:54:57 PM »
Scene one: Learning to love yourself.

 I can’t believe this. That guy who claims he’s Emiya’s kid tosses me in here with this woman, and casually announces that she’s a female version of me. I mean, sure, the hair and eyes, maybe... a bit... but otherwise no way. A relative, sure... but me?

 No way. I mean, if I were a girl, then I suppose having such a great figure would be about right, considering how fabulous I am...

 ...Nah. Couldn't be.

“Uh... Shinji, right?” she chirps, with an uneven voice.

“Yeah?” I reply.

“Um, well... I know what you’re thinking, and I thought that it couldn’t be true, but he’s right. We’re the same person, except our genders are reversed. Um... Can I ask? You had to subdue Sakurai too, right?” she stumbles over her words.

“Well, yeah. The old man made me do it at first, but I kinda kept at it because of my own demons. Emiya kinda beat the shit out of me for it when he found out, though, so I’m not about to say I haven’t paid for it,” I answer. I scan the room as I do. Apart from the couch, there's really nothing else here.

“So, I guess you were the aggressor, then?” she continues.

“Yeah,” I answer, again.

“Could you be gentle?” she asks a strange question.

“Yea, I suppose, but why would I be? Sakura took my birth right from me,” I reply, raising an eyebrow.

“I meant, with me.”

 “I um… what?” I stumble out, dumbfounded.

 Shinjiko slides on to my lap smiling. “Satoshi healed me so I’m a virgin again. Who better to trust my first time with then myself?”

 “Pfft, get real,” I scoff, feeling the heat in my cheeks.

“I am real” she replies, gripping my crotch. “And it looks like this guy's pretty real. So come on.”

Before I can protest she has my belt undone, and is pressing her ample chest into my face. “Relax, Onii-chan, I’ll make you feel really good,” she tells me with a grin, slipping her hand around my shaft stroking it softly.

 I can’t protest- she’s amazing, and she barely touched me. “Take your breasts out.”

She smiles dripping confidence. “Oh. Do you want to play with my chest, Onii-chan?”

 “Yeah,” I mutter reluctantly. Damn this girl. I can’t get a hold of any ground.

 She unbuttons the familiar girls uniform's shirt, exposing a pair of tits that would make Rider jealous.

“Go on, Onii-chan- as long as it’s you, I don’t mind. Do as you like,” She spurs me forward, rubbing my heat faster.

 I thrust my face into her melons, and begin sucking and tonguing her nipples, hard and fast, causing her breathing to change, and she changes her strokes to long slow ones.

“Would you like me to polish your big rod?” she asks, stealing a kiss, and a bit of saliva connects us for a moment, before it snaps.

 I nod, hardly feeling it- it's as if I’m outside my body. She slides down stripping my pants off and gripping my member tightly.

 She licks her lips. “Mmm... It looks tasty, Onii-chan... I want it all,” She teases me with her smile, then she swallows it to the base in one go.

 I’m in shock. Sakura’s in pain when I go deep into her throat, but this girl seems perfectly at home licking my balls with my cock all the way down her throat. Her attentions only get stronger with each moment. My dick feels like it’ll dissolve in her throat, but all of a sudden, she becomes incredibly rough, swirling her tongue around my member and sucking hard enough that I lose sensation everywhere on my body except where she’s attending.

 She pulls off my heat suddenly, with a sloppy wet noise, causing me to explode, drenching her face and tits with my hot seed. Her eyes glaze over and she stares at me if in a trance.

“Onii-chan’s cum… it’s so hot and strong,” she mutters cleaning herself off swallowing every drop she can before engulfing my magic stick between her pillowy soft love mounds.

“I’ll get you good and hard again, just relax,” she says, caressing my thickness with her massive fun bags. Her attention is so much better then Sakura’s. I’ve been an idiot- consensual sex is awesome.

 She swallows the tip greedily, and sucks until I’m at full attention, then lifts off and stands up removing her panties. Shinjiko smiles and bends over, spreading her wet exposed slit with two fingers.

“Here, Onii-chan, go on however you want to,” she tells me with a sly smile.

 It’s a different kind of submission and, despite my mind not wanting to give in and let her be in charge, my body moves on its own, slipping my throbbing rod into her soft hole as I grasp her hips.

 For a moment I’m paralyzed until Shinjiko’s soft moan reaches my ears. Promptly want to hear more of that velvety smooth voice, I begin thrusting hard, one hand grabbing her wrist and caressing her stiff nipples with the other.

 My lovely partner doesn’t resist one bit instead working to make it better. God, I can’t believe I wasted all that time forcing it on Sakura, when this chick is so much better.

 Her moans almost become screams, and a line of drool crawls down her chin- I don't think she even realises.

“Come on, Onii-chan! You’re a big man, do me harder! Harder!” she screams.

 I can’t help but comply when her eyes look back at me with such lust. I continue thrusting inside her, the couch we’re on creaking loudly, going even faster, uncaring, senseless to the world.

“Yesss! That’s it, more! More! Fuck me with your hot meat stick!” her screams get louder, until finally, I release inside her. She tenses, enture body rigid, twitching, before she collapses into my arms with a content sigh. The couch finally breaks, and we’re left on the floor in a sticky, satisfying mess.

 End of scene

 Scene two:

 I wake up in bed, naked and staring at an unfamiliar ceiling, only slowly remembering that I’m staying with Shiki at the Tohno mansion. As I sit up, I find Kohaku at my bedside. Her amber eyes and soft red hair are very easy on the eyes but from what I've read, I feel guilty thinking that way.

“You shouldn’t, girls like to be complimented,” she smiles, as if reading my mind.

“Uh, well, ok... I think you’re very beautiful Kohaku-sa-” I’m cut off as she places a finger over my mouth.

“I told you, just call me Kohaku, Toshi-kun!” she says in a stern voice.

“Right...” I reply awkwardly.

“Good. Well, thank you for the compliment- coming from you, I know it’s not a plot to get anything,” she says, grabbing my arm. “Hold still, you passed out earlier. Akiha-sama asked me to treat you.”

I nod compliantly. It’s a little odd- I remember Kohaku being casual when in private. I suppose she wants me to know it’s officially from Akiha.

 Kohaku gently dabs my arm to disinfect the area, and injects me with a bluish liquid in a tiny syringe.

 My arm starts to feel heavy, and it's not long before the feeling spreads to the rest of my body. She injects me again; this time, with an off-yellow substance. I fall back to the bed, and there’s a sudden pain in my temples. I close my eyes for what feels like a moment, and when I open them, Saber appears in my view, eyes burning with a golden light, the air dimmer around her where her darkened mana hangs heavy around her. Darkened Saber, then, my befuddled mind reports to me.

“Do not be angry with her, Kohaku and I both truly wanted this,” she says, pulling me to a sitting position and opening both my zipper and my shirt with a single swift movement of her hand.

 My vision is blurry, and I’m a little dizzy- I can’t concentrate on anything long enough to flush out whatever Kohaku put in me. Saber’s golden eyes fill my vision as a warm sensation meets my lips.

 I try to protest as she releases me, but she only slips her tongue inside my mouth roughly, almost reaching my throat, to quiet me.

“It is not often a king comes to their subject. So obey me, as I have granted you this privilege,” she states firmly, taking a soft grip on my manhood and beginning a slow stroking motion.

“Please bear with us, Toshi-kun. You helped me, so I wanted to do as you said and help Saber. And, to be honest, I want to love you as well,” Kohaku says, kissing me gently.

 Alter undresses as my cock finishes its rise to attention. Her body is small but sensual, despite my other feelings. Saber sits on my lap, her soft pink lips grazing my thick heat, but I interrupt her, groggy as I am.

 If I have no choice, then I suppose enjoying it is all I can do. “Saber, if you aren’t going to prepare me properly, then I will make this the worst sex you’ll ever have,” I state with surprising clarity.

 Alter's eyebrows twitch down into a frown. “Very well. Kohaku, prepare him,” she orders, standing.

 Kohaku’s beautiful amber eyes meet mine, and she gets down on her knees, now fully naked- how had I missed that, even drugged as I am?- and softly grips my member, kissing it sweetly, before swallowing, it bit by bit, until she reaches the mid point of my throbbing heat.

 Before I can tell her she doesn’t have to do it she starts sucking vigorously while stroking and caressing my shaft and balls.

 Unable to hold back, I let my load out in her small mouth as her eyes lock with mine. Kohaku swallows without hesitation, smiling at me, as she licks her lips. I can’t help but stiffen to an almost painful hardness at the sight, and without bothering to consult my brain, my body pulls Kohaku up onto my lap.

 Kohaku blushes slightly and alter frowns.

“What are you doing?! You’re prepared, now service your king!” she orders.

“Kohaku prepared me, so she gets the first taste of my service. I may be your subject, but that’s no excuse for treating me poorly. As punishment, you’ll wait for your turn,” I reply.

 Alter stares for a moment before frowning deeply. “Very well,” she says, accepting that I'm serious.

 Kohaku looks embarrassed for a moment- probably surprised I can protest through the drugs. We exchange awkward smiles as she slowly eases her wet warmth down to grip my tip. Lowering herself further, she grips tightly around my chest, burying her face into my neck. Her emotions slowly blossoming like this are fantastically cute.

 She squeaks in surprise as takes me in completely, I’d imagine I’m rather big for a woman who hasn’t been active for such a long time.

“Are you alright?” I whisper.

 She nods. “Don’t worry about me, Toshi-kun, this was my choice after all. But let me take the lead in this.”

 “As you wish,” I reply, lying back on the bed.

 Kohaku’s gentle smile returns as she places her hands on my chest and arches her back slightly, beginning to ride me.

 She moans softly, giving a low growl as she comes down to sheathe me again, and continues in kind until her body collapses against mine, as she cums with a sigh and a tightening of her fingers on my chest. I didn’t cum inside her, but that’s fine with me- Kohaku needs to take it slowly now, and her mouth more then makes up for it- that aside, there’s Saber.

 I really shouldn’t, but I told her I'd do her- of course, the fact that I’m drugged to the gills probably has a lot to do with that. I gently lift kohaku off my swollen member and lay her back down on the bed, then turn to Saber and motion to the door.

 Saber nods and leaves, and I softly caress kohaku’s cheek. “Get some rest. You deserve it.”

I exit quietly and join Saber who’s looking at me somewhat crossly.

“Shower,” I state, taking her wrist and dragging her along. She yanks her hand from my grasp, so I pick her naked ass up and carry her to the shower.

“Unhand me,” she demands in an angry tone, before I kiss her openly on the mouth, stunning her.

“This will be your only chance to sheathe my sword. King or not, I shall have no disrespect to me.” I tell her, shutting the bathroom door behind us.

 Strangely, she smirks, twists out of my grip, and shoves me against the bathroom door, narrowing her eyes.

 "Excellent. I would not respect you if you were weak. If you want my respect, then prove your body’s worth, child,” she responds, kissing me hard, biting my lip as she pulls away and steps into the shower turning it on.

 I step inside. The water is nearly boiling hot, and even the steam scalds my skin.

“That’s it... Endure for your king,” she says, smiling, as she bends over and spreads herself with two fingers.

 Stepping through the heat I see her soft pinkness waiting for me. I shouldn’t, but between the drugs clouding my mind, and the beautiful body before me, wet and willing, I can’t think why not- and couldn't care less. I grab her hips with one hand, and ease my thick heat inside with the other.

 Plunged to the hilt inside her softness our eyes meet as she turns her head, only managing to see me out of the corner of her eye. She snorts with annoyance, pushes me back, my cock slipping out of her, then turns to face me, wrapping her arms around my neck. She lifts herself up off the ground with that grip, bites my lip for a moment, then lets herself fall onto my heat, taking it to the hilt in one go, legs not managing to reach the ground.

“You are a shameful child to be doing, this but none the less magnificent, physically. Come. Drench my insides with your power, and wipe my mind of all but your taste and smell and feel,” she tells me, wrapping her legs around my waist, and somehow managing to pull me deeper into herself.

 Wet as we are, our bodies slide together and apart easily. No effort is required to bury myself deep inside her hotness. Our bodies are in perfect unison, clenching and throbbing together, as a string of saliva separates our rough playful kisses.

Alter cums collapsing against me, tightening enough to force me to release myself inside her womanhood. She nips my ear. “I am pleased, my knight. I may call upon your services sometime soon.”

scene three:

Satsuki’s plea that Arcuied having Shiki all to herself was unfair was a sympathetic one- but all the same, we agreed that she stood no chance by herself. The next day she came back with Sion who, while I’m new to meeting, was exceptionally cute. Although that may be because I used irrelevant statistical data to out-math her, and she blew her top.

 Sion stated that, while she hated the idea of drinking blood, my power, coupled with Avalon, should be able to restore her after the fight with Arc. I grilled her to make sure she wasn’t being desperate and after confirming she was right- in theory, at least- I agreed to allow Satsuki and her to feed on me.

 Being an idiot, I didn’t question why they brought me to Ciel’s place- and so we ended up in a rather strange situation- Sion, holding Ciel’s arms in a lock behind her back, forcing the battle nun to straddle me, while Satsuki paws at my chest and drinks my blood.

“Damn it, Satoshi, you idiot! How could you fall for this?” Ciel yells.

“We did not trick him. He agreed to help us- you should, too- After all, you think the True Ancestor selfishly keeping Shiki to herself is wrong as well.” Sion pipes up.

 Satsuki sits up, licking the blood from her lips. “Please, help us, Senpai- surely, even if we have to share Tohno-kun, it’s better then nothing at all, like now. And Satoshi gets Arc- everybody wins!” she pleads, giving Ciel a sensual kiss, and gently biting her collarbone, not quite drawing blood, causing the battle nun to blush.

 Ciel casts around for an escape route for a second. “What about you? These two feeding is one thing, but to empower me we’d have to…” she says, trailing off.

“Have sex,” I finish for her. “And yes I’m ok with it. To be honest, Ciel, both senpai and otherwise, intrigues me.” I admit feeling my cheeks flare.

 Ciel’s face reddens in response. “I-is t-that s-so?” she asks, startled.

 Before I can answer Satsuki kisses me and then Ciel in short order “Can you taste him? Tastes good, right? Sweet like strawberries.”

Ciel is completely out of it, redder than Sensei’s hair, and, taking the opportunity, Sion and Satsuki quickly undress her and slide her back onto my lap, fully naked. Ciel snaps back to her senses as my thickness grazes her lust-soaked thighs. “Y-you’re rather big, Satoshi...” She comments nervously.

 I kiss her gently, pulling her to me so our stomachs touch. “It’ll fit,” I assure her calmly, stealing another kiss. Ciel is off kilter, letting me slowly explore her body, her stiffness giving way bit by bit to my warm hands.

 I lie back, smiling, but before Ciel can sheathe me, Sion takes over, and begins licking my member softly as Satsuki plays with Ciel’s breasts from behind. Ciel’s eyes focus on me as if to ask for help, so I pull Satsuki off her and give the vampire school girl my wrist instead. Satsuki takes it, sinking lovingly into my flesh, drinking slowly of my life essence. Ciel pulls me forward into her breasts as a thank you and I let a moan escape my lips as Sion swallows my seed in a slow and noisy manner, and pulls away, rising to my neck and nipping into it.

 Ciel’s hand trails down my chest and then takes hold of my swollen heat, then slowly impales herself on my sword, all the way to the hilt. The vampire girls pin me to the bed, Satsuki wanting more than my wrist, and the two caress my chest, taking turns at my neck, as the other blood drinker kisses my lips and chest tenderly.

 All the while Ciel rides me without restraint. It becomes hard to focus as I let out two thick volleys of my hot seed inside the lovely blue haired girl. I slip into sleep as Ciel collapses, holding me.

 I awaken to find a naked Arc in bed with me with a note reading “We won, have fun and change the sheets when you’re finished!”

I laugh inwardly looking forward to the time I’ll have with Arc.

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Lantz's fics / Medea's Punishment (lemon)
« on: October 31, 2013, 09:37:53 PM »
“You want me to what?” I ask in disbelief.

“Teach caster a lesson,” Ilya smiles innocently.

“... By spanking her,” I laugh.

“By spanking her,” Ilya says, still smiling.

 I cross my arms and look down at the child. “And why would I do that?”

 “You know I’ll do worse,” she says, voice now cold and harsh.

“Fair enough,” I reply, heading to the room where Caster's held.

 The castle is large and Leysritt follows me without a word- Ilya must've ordered her to watch and assist me, and make sure I don’t try to break Caster out. This universe is pretty normal but I’d never have expected caster to be caught.

 I enter the room. It’s actually a spectacularly decorated bedroom- like all the others in the castle, actually, so I assume they weren’t expecting to be able to capture anyone. Caster is naked on the bed, her wrists and ankles strapped to the bedposts.

 I’m not a pervert but I have to admit- her body is fantastic; from her lovely painted lips, to her curves and sparkling eyes, every inch another diamond set into glass.

 Leysritt points to the chair and picks up caster, snapping the tough leather bonds easily. I walk over silently and sit down with a sigh, as Leysritt places her on my lap, her stomach over my thighs.

“W-what are you going to do to me?” Caster asks, unable to glare at me in this position.

“Ilyasviel says you need to be punished, so I'm going to spank you. She implied she would do worse if I refused,” I explain, placing my hand on her supple ass.

“You’re very pretty Medea” I remark, hand roaming and rubbing her perfectly shaped ass.

“I don’t want to hear that from y- Ah!” she yelps in surprise as I give her rump a light smack.

“Hush, now. I’m not being cruel, it’s just a few slaps on the bum. A pretty light punishment, given that you’ve been stealing prana from the whole town.” I reply giving her ass another smack.

 Her ass ripples and jiggles, like waves on water. I expected her backside to a bit undefined, but Medea’s ass is basically all fat. It's strangely appealing.

 Leysritt leans down to whisper in my ear. “Ilya-sama demands her spanked until she’s rosy red.”

I sigh, and smack medea’s ass again, farharder than before.

“Y-you brute! H-how dare you?!” she yells, squirming- but I cut her off with a harder slap.

“You can hate me if you like, but if you carry on protesting, I'm going to walk out, Ilya's going to walk in and you'll be in a far worse situation,” I reply, striking her beautiful ivory backside again, the smack echoing in the massive room.

 She cries out at the strike, but doesn't speak again.

 She yelps at each slap, but keeps quiet until her ass is almost completely red. “P-please... stop...” she begs, trembling with pain, fear and-

I lift my hand from her burning hot flesh, and now that I’m paying attention, I realize a familiar slick juice is coating my fingers.

 Caster certainly isn’t a masochist- she's more submissive, I think. “Leysritt, I’ve done as Ilya asked. Could you go get me something for caster’s injury?”

Leysritt pauses, then nods and leaves, returning with a small tub of greenish cream.

 I take the container, press my fingers into the cream, and slowly begin it to rub Medea’s supple cheeks. She whimpers and tenses at first, but slowly bgins to relax, and a sigh escapes her mouth.

“Leysritt, you should return to Ilya. I’ve done her job,” I tell her, as caster squirms at my touch.

 Leysritt nods, understanding, and once she leaves Medea quietly speaks.

“W-why are you doing this?” she asks.

“I told you, Ilya would have done worse,” I answer, gently massaging her hindquarters.

“Ah- N-no, I meant healing my wounds- you could have left me with an aching rear. Why didn’t you?” she replies, sighing blissfully as her tender wound is soothed.

“The only thing you’ve done is fight against her in the holy grail war, which isn’t wrong at all. I couldn’t leave you like that. Aside from that I think scars are something only boys should have.” I answer, finishing her treatment.

 Caster looks back at me “I... see. Thank you, boy.”

 “Come, now. That’s no way to refer to me when you're so turned on by my touch,” I smile, moving my wet hand in front of her face, close enough for her to smell it.

“Ah- I- I...” she stops, realizing there's really nothing she can say, and sighs. “What would you have me call you?”

 “Satoshi.”

 “C-could you please untie me, Satoshi?”

I shake my head.

“I’m no threat to you, I’m almost out of energy,” she protests.

“I could fix your energy problem if you wanted, I’m aware that your master is gone now” I reply.

 She tenses, growling lightly. “He was my one and only Master. Still… would you help me defeat that golden Archer, Satoshi?”

I nod.

“V- Very well, then. Let us come together as one,” she says nervously.

 I undress and guide her head to my throbbing heat. “Let’s prepare properly, Medea,” I tell her, slipping a finger into her wet slit.

 She flushes slightly, and takes the cue; her tongue caresses my member gently from base to tip before caster engulfs the head and begins to suck roughly.

 Lighting erupts through me and for a moment I almost let her set the pace. I start to move my fingers quickly inside her to let her know who has control.

 Medea swirls her tongue around my head quickly and starts to prod the hole at the tip fiercely. I give her ass a good slap and she tenses, then sucks more gently, moaning, as I go back to working her wet folds.

 Her hips sway in time with the motions of my fingers until she shivers, soaking my fingers with her lust.

 Sinking to her knees, she continues, attending my throbbing member with her lustful tongue, working what she can’t fit in her mouth with her hand while her free one fondles my balls gently.

 Her careful attentions are so skilled I melt in her mouth spraying a huge load down her throat. She smiles, displaying my seed on her tongue, before swallowing with a loud gulp and an incredibly sexy smile on her painted purple lips.

“So much, and you’re still rock hard. It seems I have great fortune in my new master,” she remarks, kissing the tip passionately and leaving a purple smear on my head to mark her territory. “I am ready, master,” she says, standing, looking embarrassed at how generously her lust soaks her thighs.

 I nod and grasp her hips, pulling her onto my lap. Her wet lips cling to my sword as she slides up, and then down, and sheathes me deep within her hot ocean.

 For a moment our eyes meet, we both smile, and she says, “I have never taken one such as you, I fear I may break,” before kissing me passionately, as her inner walls constrict harder around my throbbing member.

 I return the kiss and rub her ass roughly, squeezing it with both hands. I can still feel the heat from our "session". “You know I’m always gentle, Medea- especially with such a lovely woman as yourself,” I reply, kissing her deeply again, slipping my tongue into her mouth.

 Our tongues wrestle feverishly, finally ceasing with our need to breathe. “It will make more than flattery to win me over, Satoshi-sama. I’m not a school girl,” Medea counters, kissing my neck and nipping my collarbone, sending a shock through my body.

 I massage a breast with one hand. “No, you are a mature woman with a fabulous body and a keen mind. And can you really call it flattery when it’s true?" I begin to suck the other breast, tonguing her large nipples.

 Medea flushes slightly. “You may be right…” she says stirring her hips sending lighting through my body.

 I stand up still inside her and move us to the bed, laying her on her back. We kiss again; softly this time. Her blue eyes sparkle in a youthful manner and I throb hard.

 I spread her legs, then grasp her ankles and push her legs, positioning her feet behind her head, and then hold her thighs as I begin thrusting, fast and hard. Medea starts to moan louder and louder as I thrust deeper and faster into her precious place.

 Eventually, as the heat and friction become too much for us, we cum together. I help her take her legs from behind her head and we kiss passionately, then head to the shower to clean up. Getting caster out of the castle is another matter.

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Lantz's fics / Route to Happiness (lemon)
« on: October 31, 2013, 09:26:52 PM »
My name is Satoshi Alexander Emiya Pendragon. I am the son of the greatest knight the world has ever known- the King of Knights; Arturia Pendragon, King of Britain. I have always worked hard to maintain manners befitting a prince and knight. I have fought beasts of every shape and size and defeated the man known as the king of heroes, I have battled the princess of the True Ancestors bare handed and even come back from the dead.

 It is these accomplishments and yet more that fill me with pride. It is also because of these deeds that I feel ashamed that I am in this situation at all.

 I, the prince of knights, champion of the Lady of the Lake, and scourge of the counter guardians, am being held captive by an insane vampire school girl by the name of Yumizuka Satsuki.

“So I figure that Shirou has those girls in Fuyuki, and Shiki has the girls from here Misaki, and neither of us have any partners, so I thought you could be the hero of my route!”

I repeat, insane.

“I mean, you’d have it hard, but you’d be well rewarded- and with all the money they can put into making the game the fight scenes could actually be animated!”

Fantastically insane.

“Huh? You don’t look impressed. I thought boys liked action-y stuff,” she smiles, bouncing into my field of vision like a rabbit on prozac.

 Of course I’m not impressed. Animated scenes are bloody required to make a game of any kind nowadays… Damn you, Hideo Kojima! I miss text boxes and eight bit sound effects!

 Her eyes narrow. “Oh, I see,” she says in a sly voice. “You’re a big boy who wants a taste of a real reward.”

Wait, what? is she doing what I think-

I jerked on reflex as Satsuki undresses completely, licking her lips. “Aww, don’t be shy. Consider this a preview of our H-scene!”

I’ve always pushed my way forward, and this time is no exception...

 ... Is what I’d like to say but if I could, I’d have already run, and been far, far away by now. She pulls me forward into a soft kiss exploring my mouth with her tongue. I have to admit- she’s crazy, but she has talent.

 Her lips pull away from mine and she smiles, before sinking her teeth into my neck. As my blood begins to leave me I’m thankful that at least I won’t be turned into a vampire.

 My head is light as Satsuki’s crimson eyes meet mine. “Now, kiss me, Toshi-kun.” A throbbing begins in the back of head.

 I kiss her as the urge overwhelms me. She must be a lot stronger than the average vampire, because my body doesn’t stop with just one kiss; we share many as she unchains me, smiling happily.

“Give into your desires, Toshi-kun. I’ll take all your love,” she commands, laying back on the nearby bed, legs in the air as she parts her wet folds with a hungry look.

 Try as I might I can’t resist her compulsions. I strip down and move to the bed, grabbing her hips roughly. Satsuki trembles quietly, giving a cute cry as I slowly slip inside her to the hilt.

 Her legs wrap around my waist and she sits up, winding her arms around my neck. I kiss her softly, throbbing as she clenches my sword tightly with her sheath. “It’s hot; come on, fill me, thrust good and hard,” she whispers, nipping my ear.

 I resist long enough to reposition her on the bed. She looks back expectantly, on her hands and knees, waiting for me to continue. I do, slipping all the way into her wetness in one stroke.

 Satsuki’s moans fill the air as I thrust harder and faster until we finally cum together, and her voice rises so high it cracks the mirror.

“Can I pick em or what?” she asks with a laugh, collapsing into a pillow as I withdraw from her.

 She turns to look at me surprised. “Oh, I thought that was a typo in your character material entry…” she blurts, red faced, before swallowing my stained sword completely. Her red eyes look up lovingly as she polishes me swirling her tongue around vigorously until I cum again.

“There! All cleaned up,” she says cheerfully, standing up and swallowing my juice with a smile.

 Looking into her eyes I can’t tell her no. “I’m a bit tired, Satsuki, can we rest?” I ask, staving off an answer to the obvious question looming before me.

 She nods and we get in bed. As she drifts off to sleep I’m convinced now that my answer to her question will be all too sad. That's why I cannot answer her.

 Never thought I’d kidnap a vampire. Though that still seems a bit sad.

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Lantz's fics / Lantz's Q and A thread
« on: October 31, 2013, 07:28:29 PM »
The previous thread became something of a nonsense pit completely off topic. As such I find that making another thread is prudent, plus it's efficient for anybody reading stories etcetera after the fact.

here's the way this will work. I'm going to create place holder posts with an indexed story name, Questions and answers will be put there as I receive them. With that in mind please don't post until I am finished  with the place holder posts.

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Lantz's fics / Sakura mega pack
« on: October 30, 2013, 03:48:33 PM »
“You naughty boy, Toshi-kun... I know how much you lust after this innocent body of mine,” Rider taunts me playfully, putting on a fake look of embarassment. She licks her lips hungrily, eyes penetrating, behind those glasses.

 I sigh inwardly at her bad acting. Apparently angra’s influence turns you into an actor exceeding William freaking Shatner.

“Oh my!" she exclaims, hand running over my crotch, smiling. "Is this my fault?” she asks, with fake innocence, knowing I can't answer. She laughs and pulls back.

 Rider leaves for a few minutes, and returns dressed head to toe in a sexy nurse’s outfit. I throb at the sight of her ample curves stuck in a costume a size too small. I can see her royal purple panties as she spreads her legs slightly.

 I can make out the shape of her nipples, hard enough to push up the fabric of the outfit, as she srawls onto the bed, pressing her ample breasts down onto my face as she continues to caress my pants. I hear my zipper, and she lifts her breasts from my face, one hand lifting my head into a deep kiss, the other dextrously removing my pants and gripping my throbbing heat though my boxers.

 It twitches as she begins to rub it with her thumb. “Oh my, you look like you’re in pain. Let Nurse Medusa have a look at the affected area,” she mocks, stripping me of my boxers. She laughs slightly and leans back, then suddenly jerks back, and I hear a thud, some rustling, and then Rider is replaced by Dark Saber.

“I’m not saving you out of the goodness of my heart, Satoshi. But I know you want out, and I know you don’t want to leave me like this,” she announces, pausing.

 It’s a terrible pause- we both know she’s only doing it to let her intentions sink in.

 Saber leans in, pressing her lips to mine and slipping her tongue into my mouth, exploring, before she drapes Rider’s wet panties over my throbbing member. “Well, she’s got taste in clothing, at least,” Saber says, stroking my member strongly.

“”It feels good, doesn’t it?” she asks, her soft hand increasing in pace, until my pride barely prevents me from bucking against her gentle yet somehow firm grip.

 I can’t reply. Her ministrations cause lighting to run through my body, becoming more and more intense, as she watches me, a wicked smile on her face. “That’s it... Let your body say it for you,” she coaxes, leaning in close, licking her lips, then mine, then moving in for another exploration of my mouth.

 I finally release as she slips her tongue into my mouth, taking the lead as our tongues touch. She pulls back and shows off the purple panties stained with mine and Rider’s lust.

“Mmmm. It smells strong... but then, you wouldn’t be anything but,” she laughs seductively, staring at me with those golden eyes. I shouldn’t be aroused, but logic pales in the face of libido. She holds my head between her hands and pulls me into a kiss, smiling. “I know how I should feel about this after I am restored, but I want you to understand I am not ashamed of this. I wish for you to pleasure me and hold nothing back. If you cooperate and give me what I wish, then I will do the same for you, and end this quickly,” she says.

 I can tell from her eyes that she isn’t lying, so I take a breath and answer her.

“I can’t while I’m restrained,” I reply, with a small laugh.

 Alter narrows her eyes, then smiles, standing, planting a foot on each side of my hips. She moves her hands up underneath her skirt, exposing her pale thighs- but no more- and slips her black panties out, lifting each leg in turn, each motion teasing me with more flashes of white skin. She takes a seat on my thighs, and presses her feet down onto my face. “Lick from there to my softness, and reveal my lust, and I shall trust you not to betray me," she announces, draping her soft undergarments over my throbbing heat still dirty with my seed and rider’s lust.

 I don’t resist. I have to save Rin from Sakura and, I have to be honest, I like strong people. I softly begin to lick her feet. I think she showered before coming to find me. Actually she smells like roses, she just watches me, smirking slightly, until I begin to suck on her toes.

 Alter’s gold eyes widen slightly, and her back arches, nipples pressing against the fabric of her outfit, a hand moving slowly to her mouth, slowly licking and biting a finger. I can't tell whether she's trying to turn me on or if it's an unconscious motion. She lets out a soft sigh, and her lust starts to flow freely and generously onto my thighs. I start to kiss my way up her calf, and she pushes my face back with her unattended foot and begins to slowly stroke me. “B-both of them, Satoshi,” she demands, shivering from pleasure.

 I start again, as she demands, but slower this time, gentle sucking causing her to moan softly, and she shudders, then allows me to move up. My lips and tongue move up her, quickly, impatiently, slowing as I near her area. As i gently kiss her thighs, she suddenly slides up my body, smothering me in her leaking lust as she grasps the back of my head.

“Lick,” she orders me, panting, running her fingers through my hair.

 I start, gently, which seems to aggravate Alter, as she buries me deeper in her skirt. I plunge my tongue inside, licking deep and fast, irregularly, not leaving a single crevice untouched.

 Alter rocks, moaning loudly, panting, as she trembles. “Yes, like that, just like that, deeper!”

I wait a moment, pace just as it was before, and she lets out an impatient moan, almost animalistic in its need. I delve deeper than I've gone before, and she stiffens, cumming hard, almost choking me. I pull back on reflex but Alter’s grip tightens, keeping me in place. “N-no, not yet, get a good mouthful, I want to know how I taste,” she demands, panting, groping herself over her dress.

 At this point I know it’s not about telling the truth, it’s about pleasing your partner- with that in mind, I reply. “Wonderful,” I tell her.

 Seemingly satisfied, she eases up, sliding back down my body to caress my throbbing heat with her slit. She teases me by grazing the tip as she licks her juices off me.

“Such a large blade for my sheath to take,” she remarks, then impales herself in one swift motion. We both cry out, at our sudden joining.

 Alter begins to ride me without restraint, her movements hungry, desperately tugging at her black dress almost tearing it to remove it, until she’s left wearing only black thigh highs and a devious smile.

 Alter roughly steals a kiss, then presses my face to her chest, panting and moaning, until she finally tightens around my heat, and collapses with a scream, forcing my own release.

 As we lie together, I feel the curse lift from the area, and I relax, slipping into sleep.

Interlude

 Her violation by her darkened sister suddenly stops, but Tohsaka Rin’s anger does recede. Naked, covered in bruises and shameful lust soaking her thighs from the violation of her rear, Tohsaka Rin cannot simply forgive her sister.

 Taking her chance, the girl snaps up and uses the whip which had caused her so much pain to tie up her sister’s hands, then pushes her over, pressing her down on the ground.

 Taking the strap-on Sakura had intended for use on her, Rin quickly attaches it, and plunges it into Sakura. Her thrusts start out hard and fast, causing Sakura to yelp at the sudden action. Sakura’s guilt loses to her fear, and she begs Rin to stop, but human speech is quickly drowned out by the now-familiar lust, and her loud moans fill the area.

 As Sakura’s body gives in and her screams get louder, hips moving with Rin’s, the older sister strikes the younger sister’s ass, fingering her rear, deep and intense, after each strike.

 Sakura finally collapses, her inner muscles clenching the thick black dildo greedily. Rin pulls out suddenly, pushing Sakura down on to her knees, the raven haired girl’s eyes demanding Sakura clean up her mess.

 Sakura, exhausted from the sudden attack, follows the unspoken directions, engulfing the wet black length, and sucking hard, stroking it with her tongue, then swallowing the juices as she pulls away.

 Satisfied, Rin removes the strap-on, then gets up and heads to the bathroom, leaving Sakura aching and emotionally spent.

/Interlude

 I wake up to find myself alone. Alter was right- it had to be done, and hopefully my master won’t yell at me for running off- wait what am I thinking? My master's Rin Tohsaka, there’s no doubt I’ll be yelled at.

 I get up and stumble toward the shower- no sense in stinking with sweat when I meet her again.

 I stumble into the bath room and, stepping into the shower, I find my master as naked as I am, her body battered with bruises, readying herself to take a shower.

“Master,” I blurt out carelessly. Rin turns and, rather than slapping me in the face, throws her arms around me, pressing my rock hard member between us.

 Rin jumps at the surprise of the sensation, but leaves her arms around my neck. “A-archer, you’re alright!” she exclaims happily.

“Uh, yes master,” I reply.

 Rin blinks “Hey, wait, why aren’t you calling me Rin like you usually do?” she asks curiously.

 I step back parting her arms from my neck. “I’ve caused you so much trouble, I don’t think I have the right to,” I reply, looking away.

 The reward for my honesty is the smack I'd been expecting earlier. “Don’t you dare take the blame for this!”

I don’t- can’t- react, save to remember to move with the hit when she strikes me.

“Now, call me by name like you’re supposed to,” she says, staring at me hard.

“Of course, Rin,” I reply, now grinning.

 Rin smiles, then kisses me passionately, motioning toward the shower. I nod, and she takes my hand as we step inside. We start out shyly, gently, at first, cleaning one another. Rin trembles, fearful of her wounds and somewhat ashamed of what I’ll think, though she’d never admit that.

 I can tell what she needs right now, so as we clean off, I sink to my knees, and begin to service her virgin slit.

“H-hey, Arch-ah!” she protests, as her hips quiver and give into my attentions. Her hands run through my hair gripping me strongly as I delve deeply inside her with my tongue.

 She shivers as I thumb her clit, moaning loudly and quickly cums, collapsing into my arms. “I-inside Archer, c-cum, cum inside me,” she demands.

 As her servant- no, as a man- I can’t deny her, not after the trouble I’ve caused her. “Of course,” I tell her, easing into her.

 Rin hugs me tightly, muffling a scream as I break her hymen. I wait, and, soon enough, she starts moving on her own, pleasure taking the place of the pain.

 Her hips twitch and rock on their own as she rides me, cumming yet again, her muscles tightening around my hard member, caressing it. I cum, finally, hard enough to cover her face and breasts as I pull out.

“Damn it, Archer!” she yells.

Interlude

Saber, now free of the darkness, turns her attentions to her former master. Sakura had violated her, and teased her about Shirou and Satoshi, and made her beg for release. Saber was good and honourable- that much was true- but since being brought into this time she had also regained her heart, and, considering what she had just been made to do, it was cold indeed.

 Luckily, Saber finds Sakura all tied and prepared. The thick black strapon Rin used lies beside her foot, and, her mind working quickly, she snatches it up, donning it.

 Lifting the just-fucked Sakura by the hips, causing the girl to jump. Saber lines up the rubber length, and drives it deep into her thick ass.

 Sakura screams from the pain as the immense girth of the toy forcibly spreads her apart. Sakura tries to adjust to the motions as Saber thrusts relentlessly, driving it from base to tip with every thrust.

“You slutty little cow! How dare you make a fool of me?! You thought you could get away with disgracing me so?” she barked, pounding Sakura’s perfect ass harder, painfully squeezing her breasts with her hands. “The pain you have caused me will not be forgiven so easily. I’ll make sure you remember it every time you try to sit!” she yelled, pounding the length of the rod deep inside Sakura’s ass.

 Even as Saber continued to pound Sakura, striking her ass, the girl's thighs grew even wetter, the slick fluids doing little to decrease her pain. Even so, she came, hard, her voice sore from screaming so much, and she collapsed, face shining with tears, as the rod slipped out of her unresistaing ass.

 Sakura tears were wiped away, and a now-satisfied Saber helped her to sit up, the two silently staring at each other, wondering what to say.

/interlude

 Rin goes off to her room, and Saber shoots me a look filled with worry. The only person she could be worrying about at this point would be Sakura. Saber’s intent was plain when she used me to cure the curse, and with that in mind, I head up to Sakura's old room to find her curled up on her properly made bed.

“You can’t just go sulking Sakura. Come on, show us a smile,” I tell her.

 Sakura pulls her arms away from her face a confused look plastered on her. “Satoshi? I understand.” she turned, presenting her rear and slit.

“No Sakura, that’s not why I’m here,” I correct her.

 Sakura turns back wrapping her arms around me pushing her face close to mine “But you deserve something Satoshi, with what I’ve done to you,” she protests.

 Guilt permeates the air for the moment and I can’t really oppose her demand. “Fine. But no sex, you’ve been worked back there quite hard, and I’d rather not hurt you further,” I reply firmly.

 Sakura opens her mouth to protest again but falls silent as she sees my seriousness. “Alright, please leave it to me, then,” she says, unzipping my pants and grasping my throbbing member.

 Sakura quickly engulfs my member to the hilt, caressing my balls as she pulls back, sucking intensely on the tip. Her eyes sparkle as she traps my thickness between her soft mounds. Sucking intensely, and massaging my heat gently with her large breasts, lighting shocks me over and over until I explode, hard, calling her name.

 Sakura presents my juices on her tongue before swallowing, and giving me a sexy smile. “Was that good, Toshi-kun?” she asks innocently.

I nod, hugging her gently. Well, despite all everything else, we’re alive, and no real damage. What more could I ask for?

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