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Re: The Law Unto Herself Chronicles
« Reply #30 on: December 26, 2013, 12:41:52 AM »
Chapter 14 just went up!

Team Forest gets a plan, and Gabriel isn't having a very good day.

So, Merry Christmas, it was my present to you.

Also, any reviews on the Jukepop site itself or donations would be greatly appreciated.  Thank you.

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Re: The Law Unto Herself Chronicles
« Reply #31 on: January 18, 2014, 11:15:18 PM »
. . . I'm double posting but . . .

Chapter Fifteen just went live.

Any reviews or whatnot (on the site) would be most helpful!

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Re: The Law Unto Herself Chronicles
« Reply #32 on: January 20, 2014, 12:00:59 AM »
Hmm, interesting. Is there a reason Gabriel is using projectile vomit as a weapon? Also, why does the alcohol seem to have so much of an effect on Rufus when he threw the bottle at him? He said it was acting like acid.

Oh, and which complete nutjob is insane enough to ask for Forest's godson as their slave? That seems like a good way of getting yourself killed to me....

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Re: The Law Unto Herself Chronicles
« Reply #33 on: January 20, 2014, 01:06:34 AM »
Hmm, interesting. Is there a reason Gabriel is using projectile vomit as a weapon? Also, why does the alcohol seem to have so much of an effect on Rufus when he threw the bottle at him? He said it was acting like acid.

You'll find out in the next chapter.

Also to why the alcohol burns?  Have you ever poured alcohol in an open wound? 

Oh, and which complete nutjob is insane enough to ask for Forest's godson as their slave? That seems like a good way of getting yourself killed to me....

See chapters I think three through five about Elana the Ghoul Queen.

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« Reply #34 on: January 21, 2014, 11:16:14 PM »
Also to why the alcohol burns?  Have you ever poured alcohol in an open wound? 

Ah, OK, I thought it was literally burning him....

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Oh, and which complete nutjob is insane enough to ask for Forest's godson as their slave? That seems like a good way of getting yourself killed to me....

See chapters I think three through five about Elana the Ghoul Queen.

Ah, yeah, OK.

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Re: The Law Unto Herself Chronicles
« Reply #35 on: February 10, 2014, 05:23:30 AM »
Chapter Sixteen just went live!

Now with shiny new cover.

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Re: The Law Unto Herself Chronicles
« Reply #36 on: February 22, 2014, 09:07:46 PM »
Chapter Seventeen has just went live.

Maybe capturing Gabriel Umbra will be more trouble than its worth.

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Re: The Law Unto Herself Chronicles
« Reply #37 on: March 18, 2014, 02:20:07 AM »
Soo, I was productive and Roadbuster got this proofed for me.

Chapter Eighteen just went live.

Wynn does things in her own time, Gabriel is a clever hybrid bastard, and Forest contemplates her tendencies towards violence.

Also, if one wanted, here's the artwork that Artee so kindly provided for the cover without the text.


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Re: The Law Unto Herself Chronicles
« Reply #38 on: March 29, 2014, 09:34:07 PM »
Chapter 19 just went live!

Hawk and Forest share some banter, Wynn pouts, and Gabriel's day is about to get worse.

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Re: The Law Unto Herself Chronicles
« Reply #39 on: April 16, 2014, 01:57:33 PM »
Chapter Twenty is up, True Believers!

Forest finds herself between a very awkward situation with the Faerie noble and a vampire rogue.  Also, we get to check back Eirwin and friends at the Slave Palace.

I might have to revisit Dwight.  I came up with this awesome back story for him in my head that's never going to get used.

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Re: The Law Unto Herself Chronicles
« Reply #40 on: April 28, 2014, 01:24:18 AM »
So, before the month ends . . .

Chapter Twenty-One has just gone live.

Also, click here for a special deleted scene

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Re: The Law Unto Herself Chronicles
« Reply #41 on: April 29, 2014, 05:40:39 PM »
Hmm, yeah, that is a pretty big cliff-hanger. Can Wynn not use her magic with an iron bolt in her?

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Re: The Law Unto Herself Chronicles
« Reply #42 on: May 19, 2014, 01:36:24 AM »
Just starting to read chapter 1. Manchester United is not in fact a city in the UK, Manchester is, however.

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Re: The Law Unto Herself Chronicles
« Reply #43 on: May 21, 2014, 01:18:34 AM »
Time to get these mother fucking vampires off my mother fucking plane!

Chapter Twenty-Two just went live, and Forest is making a trip to the Danger Zone!

(Also, if you have any comments on the story, I'd be really thankful if they were made on the Jukepop thread instead of here.  They have it now every time someone comments or reviews it showcases it on the front page of the site.)

Also, more cliff-hangers.

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Re: The Law Unto Herself Chronicles
« Reply #44 on: June 07, 2014, 04:11:04 AM »
Vampires On a Motherfucking Plane, AKA Chapter Twenty-Three went live this week.

Also, I was number 11 in May, so thank you for your votes.  (Next month we will conquer that purple prose vampire story . . .)