Author Topic: Fate's Mirror: Fortune and Favour (interactive fiction, possible lemon)  (Read 25535 times)

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There are stories in which that works well, yes (and Lantz has done such before), but the mechanics of this story means that it won't work well here.

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But it wouldhave been so much fun, would have given the audience a greater sense of participation and challenged the author in new and interesting ways. What's not to like?

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In Addition adding kill yourself as an option is rude at best Gray.

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I wasn't saying it to you Lantz.
I was saying it to your character.
It would have been the random funny shit that this stuff runs on. Surpise Seppuku or however it's spelt.

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'sides he's immortal, got nothing to lose

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Suicide isn't funny Gray

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Anything is funny in a comedy. Have you seen how many times rape has been played for black comedy?
Or great levels of injury?
Shaudenfreude is a thing.

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This work isn't a black comedy  Gray, in the future don't suggest such. If you want free form wait for the quest series.

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3) Apologize and leave quietly.
[13:38:37] Helligator: Depends on the god, but gods by definition in Nasuverse are strong because they have divine authority.
[13:38:48] Kat: Even the toilet god?
[13:38:56] Helligator: No one worships toilets.
[13:39:00] Helligator: Don't be a shitlord.

[04:32:08] Helligator: I can't make dragons in power armor like this

[19:50:12] francobull III: [...] why are you being all assive aggressive?

[23:32:37] Helligator: use the narrative as a means to convey an interesting story and cool conflicts with the openness you're allowed
[23:32:43] Helligator: not to CHEAT stories and conflicts

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Wow. Because the first thing we gotta have for the beginning of the fic is the clichéd bath scene with many women.

You're pulling that out this early Lantz?
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I told you I wanted no trabble.

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3) Apologize and leave quietly.

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Vote closed, winner three

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