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Of Swords and Sorcery (discussion)
« on: October 17, 2013, 10:38:22 PM »
so ok, you want to discuss Of Swords and Sorcery. Fine let's discuss it but in order to largely avoid misunderstandings let's set the ground rules.



 1) No name calling, seriously there's no need for it, it colours comments negatively and will ruin discussion.



 2) One person to a point, I have no desire to get jumped by 12 people, it makes answering a question messy too.



 3)Despite it coming in chapters the work is, plot wise, complete and as such I aim to avoid spoilers. With this in mind if I say the answer is coming then please take that as is and move on.



 4)the time period the story was written in was before the characters material largely and before. Aokos VN, as such while some of the information contained may be incorrect now all we had was speculation. So don't cite the character material for matters of plot please.



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Re: Of Swords and Sorcery (discussion)
« Reply #1 on: October 17, 2013, 11:00:51 PM »
Why don't you simply edit your freaking work then once you get new information? It boggles my mind.

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Re: Of Swords and Sorcery (discussion)
« Reply #2 on: October 17, 2013, 11:36:25 PM »
As noted in rule three arch, the story is done. The best way to fix it is as a whole. This means presenting the the whole story before reversions are made.

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Re: Of Swords and Sorcery (discussion)
« Reply #3 on: October 17, 2013, 11:51:42 PM »
Then why not post the entire thing at once?

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Re: Of Swords and Sorcery (discussion)
« Reply #4 on: October 17, 2013, 11:54:36 PM »
Well, it needs beta-reading, for one thing.

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Re: Of Swords and Sorcery (discussion)
« Reply #5 on: October 17, 2013, 11:57:40 PM »
I'd argue it needs a shredder but Beta reading is fine too.

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Re: Of Swords and Sorcery (discussion)
« Reply #6 on: October 18, 2013, 12:01:19 AM »
Arch, please don't start that, you're not helping.

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Re: Of Swords and Sorcery (discussion)
« Reply #7 on: October 18, 2013, 12:19:05 AM »
Betaing aside I'm posting it in chapters to avoid data lost like last time

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Re: Of Swords and Sorcery (discussion)
« Reply #8 on: December 09, 2013, 07:16:58 PM »
Will this story ever update?

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Re: Of Swords and Sorcery (discussion)
« Reply #9 on: December 09, 2013, 08:12:03 PM »
Yes